[灌水]HAPPY从9月2号开始不灌水了~但有什么AWA问题请尽管在此帖提问！我会尽力回答

横竖撇捺

以下是引用vacationer在2005-8-29 23:20:00的发言：

下个月中旬就要考了,可是AWA一点儿都没动,虽然每天计划上都写着要看作文

现在时间不多的情况下,应该怎么入手呢? 对了,考过T,只拿到5分

~对照WAWA的新黄金80的出频统计，或者看9月AWA的JJ...挑高频的JJ写几篇，可以帖来JJ区给大家拍砖~~：）

（建议在模考GWD的时候按考试顺序在MATH前写作文...一路写下来，每天模考一份GWD,写2篇AWA，这样18套GWD+TS，也可以写36篇作文了...但并不强求...）

另外，尽快把模版弄出来，尽量提高字数...

模版出来之后，就不用每篇的详细写了~~节省时间的，就是下载置顶的JUDY的提纲来看看，或者在本区搜索讨论提纲链接...有思路就好，遇到直接套模版...

TWE5分不错啦~个人感觉AWA比TWE判分松一些~

嘻嘻，加油！常来AWA区玩~

vacationer

以下是引用横竖撇捺在2005-8-30 0:29:00的发言：

~对照WAWA的新黄金80的出频统计，或者看9月AWA的JJ...挑高频的JJ写几篇，可以帖来JJ区给大家拍砖~~：）

（建议在模考GWD的时候按考试顺序在MATH前写作文...一路写下来，每天模考一份GWD,写2篇AWA，这样18套GWD+TS，也可以写36篇作文了...但并不强求...）

另外，尽快把模版弄出来，尽量提高字数...

模版出来之后，就不用每篇的详细写了~~节省时间的，就是下载置顶的JUDY的提纲来看看，或者在本区搜索讨论提纲链接...有思路就好，遇到直接套模版...

TWE5分不错啦~个人感觉AWA比TWE判分松一些~

嘻嘻，加油！常来AWA区玩~

谢谢哦!

今天做GWD模考的时候用小安的那个软件写了作文,随机抽的题目. AA还写了一些,不过总觉得言之无物, AI很奇怪,感觉跟TWE应该差不多,可是反而不会写了

就是这道,能帮忙看看吗? 我觉得那个黄色字部分好像很牵强,考试的时候真这么写?

59.

“Juvenile crime is a serious social problem, and businesses must become more involved in helping to prevent it.”

Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion expressed above. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.

题目类型分类(概括性陈述类)：直接表明立场并给出论据进行阐述

题目专题分类─Social Problems: (crimes) business' social duty regarding juvenile crimes

1. agree.

2. Businesses have social responsibilities, too. Imagine what if some of the teenagers involved in juvenile crimes are your employees’ kids, would your employees concentrate on their job?

3. imagine what if your foreign customers comes to this country first time, and he encounters juvenile crime, what would he think.?

4. imagine juvenile crime is so rampant that many multinational companies decide not to have their branches located in this country, how many potential customers do you lost? Under this situation, if you want to do business with these multinational companies, you have to fly to their home country, and thus your cost goes up.

5. higher juvenile crime could means higher insurance fee.

6. higher juvenile crime means a company or a factory must hire more security guards around the company, in order to protect your employees and goods.

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-8-30 7:00:03编辑过]

melodybb1224

闪~

happyfish0517

以下是引用melodybb1224在2005-8-30 7:18:00的发言：
闪~

你给我站住！！！

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-8-30 8:21:12编辑过]

happyfish0517

以下是引用vacationer在2005-8-30 6:59:00的发言：

谢谢哦!

今天做GWD模考的时候用小安的那个软件写了作文,随机抽的题目. AA还写了一些,不过总觉得言之无物, AI很奇怪,感觉跟TWE应该差不多,可是反而不会写了

我也觉得awa和twe很像呢~我经常为了省事情，对issue的观点都写成大负小正的让步反对，这样就和aa写法类似了...找不合理的逻辑错误就成...

可以多看些范文，比如awa224...可以在CD上下载的...这个是美国人写的好像~~看个几篇ISSUE就可以大致了解文章的思路...再动手写...

就是这道,能帮忙看看吗? 我觉得那个黄色字部分好像很牵强,考试的时候真这么写?

59.

“Juvenile crime is a serious social problem, and businesses must become more involved in helping to prevent it.”

Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion expressed above. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.

题目类型分类(概括性陈述类)：直接表明立场并给出论据进行阐述

题目专题分类─Social Problems: (crimes) business' social duty regarding juvenile crimes

1. agree.

2. Businesses have social responsibilities, too. Imagine what if some of the teenagers involved in juvenile crimes are your employees’ kids, would your employees concentrate on their job?

3. imagine what if your foreign customers comes to this country first time, and he encounters juvenile crime, what would he think.?

4. imagine juvenile crime is so rampant that many multinational companies decide not to have their branches located in this country, how many potential customers do you lost? Under this situation, if you want to do business with these multinational companies, you have to fly to their home country, and thus your cost goes up.

5. higher juvenile crime could means higher insurance fee.

6. higher juvenile crime means a company or a factory must hire more security guards around the company, in order to protect your employees and goods.

这个是JUDY的提纲吗？？因为我早考完了~这个提纲是JUDY新整理出炉的~我没仔细看过...

JUDY在她的帖子里也说了...提醒大家如果时间不是过于紧迫的话，还是不要单一参照她的提纲~~因为毕竟，这全都是一个人想出来的思路，有一些局限性...

如果没有思路，可以在CD上按题号搜索以往的提纲讨论...若没有讨论过~自己也可以发帖讨论...

我的意见，此题除了上述从青少年犯罪对公司业务的影响角度来阐述，也可以从以下几个方面：

1、某些BUSINESS从根本上应该为青少年犯罪负责：比如电影业电视业、游戏机娱乐业...他们应该从根本上改进自身产品的舆论导向和分级管理，为减少青少年犯罪出力。

2、公司作为社会的一分子，负有一部分的社会责任，他们交纳的税金有一部分被用来预防和阻止青少年犯罪，因此，公司应该关心政府在此方面的措施和手段，进行有效的监督和促进。

类似这样的~暂时我想到这两条...

MM可以重新开一个帖子...这样更多的人会参与进来讨论...这个帖子里可能讨论得不会那么广泛~~仅仅是MY 2 CENTS...

P.S. mm起得好早啊~~6点多！！还是在国外？？

p.p.s 刚在搜索时发现这个题目只有过一次不深入的讨论：

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=26&ID=80587&replyID=&skin=0

所以mm可以另开新贴~~征求下大家想法~嘻嘻~

a za a za fighting!!

beautywawa

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annwangwangqxwz

借宝地问个菜鸟的问题：

作文的新题是怎莫一回事？在论坛中看到如AAA, 或AIA,我买的og 中的作文list没有这些题目。那新题重要吗？在哪里可以下载到这些全部的新题呢？

annwangwangqxwz

对不起，找到并且下载了所有新旧题库。

但是还是不明白？？：这些新题是什莫东东？我买的新版的og中没有这些题呀。

happyfish0517

以下是引用annwangwangqxwz在2005-8-30 15:46:00的发言：

借宝地问个菜鸟的问题：

作文的新题是怎莫一回事？在论坛中看到如AAA, 或AIA,我买的og 中的作文list没有这些题目。那新题重要吗？在哪里可以下载到这些全部的新题呢？

cd上都有下载~是ets在04~05年增加的新题目~重要与否~请参见近期高频jj...

applemouse

请教斑竹，9月中旬就考了，是把黄金80题的提纲先看完还是到9月份在看机井里出现的题目的提纲？另外，在黄金80题里好象没有编号为AAA，AIA的题目嘛。这些新题听说也很重要吧。斑竹有何建议。谢谢先！！