以下是引用横竖撇捺在2005-8-30 0:29:00的发言：
~对照WAWA的新黄金80的出频统计，或者看9月AWA的JJ...挑高频的JJ写几篇，可以帖来JJ区给大家拍砖~~：） （建议在模考GWD的时候按考试顺序在MATH前写作文...一路写下来，每天模考一份GWD,写2篇AWA，这样18套GWD+TS，也可以写36篇作文了...但并不强求...） 另外，尽快把模版弄出来，尽量提高字数... 模版出来之后，就不用每篇的详细写了~~节省时间的，就是下载置顶的JUDY的提纲来看看，或者在本区搜索讨论提纲链接...有思路就好，遇到直接套模版... TWE5分不错啦~个人感觉AWA比TWE判分松一些~ 嘻嘻，加油！常来AWA区玩~
谢谢哦!
今天做GWD模考的时候用小安的那个软件写了作文,随机抽的题目. AA还写了一些,不过总觉得言之无物, AI很奇怪,感觉跟TWE应该差不多,可是反而不会写了
就是这道,能帮忙看看吗? 我觉得那个黄色字部分好像很牵强,考试的时候真这么写?
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“Juvenile crime is a serious social problem, and businesses must become more involved in helping to prevent it.”
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion expressed above. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
题目类型分类(概括性陈述类)：直接表明立场并给出论据进行阐述
题目专题分类─Social Problems: (crimes) business' social duty regarding juvenile crimes
1. agree.
2. Businesses have social responsibilities, too. Imagine what if some of the teenagers involved in juvenile crimes are your employees’ kids, would your employees concentrate on their job?
3. imagine what if your foreign customers comes to this country first time, and he encounters juvenile crime, what would he think.?
4. imagine juvenile crime is so rampant that many multinational companies decide not to have their branches located in this country, how many potential customers do you lost? Under this situation, if you want to do business with these multinational companies, you have to fly to their home country, and thus your cost goes up.
5. higher juvenile crime could means higher insurance fee.
6. higher juvenile crime means a company or a factory must hire more security guards around the company, in order to protect your employees and goods.
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发表于 2005-8-28 21:12:00
