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发表于 2005-8-19 08:24:00 | 只看该作者

TWE作文,請各位指教...

Topic: In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.



For this issue, we are hard to find an appreciate viewpoint. Some people agree with that teenagers have jobs while they are still students but others don’t agree with this. In my opinion, I prefer that teenagers should have jobs while they are still students. There are some reasons that I present, as below.



First of all, working is learning as we know. How to prove what we learn in the schools becomes a key issue, especially for teenagers. Therefore, the best way to prove the knowledge of the classes is only working out of campus. Besides, teenagers also can learn other knowledge that teachers don’t say in the classes when they work. Based on this, working can not only prove what we learn but also learn more.



Secondly, human being is a kind of community animals. Nobody can survive very well without friends. So, how to make friends is very important for everyone, especially for teenagers. Except for classmates in the schools, teenagers also meet a lot of working partners when they work. Then, they also can understand how to survive in this big society in the future.



Last but not least, what kinds of jobs are suitable for teenagers? For me, the jobs should be legal, health for teenagers. The most important thing is that they don’t have to spend a lot of time to work on this because their duty is students. So, working in the library, coffee shop or other part-jobs such as teaching assistants is good jobs.



Therefore, I agree with that teenagers should have jobs while they are still students although many people don’t agree with this. But these jobs should be a health or good jobs.

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2005-8-19 08:25:00 | 只看该作者

對了,我也會幫其他朋友看看的....


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板凳
发表于 2005-8-25 03:18:00 | 只看该作者
关于各个段落的连词,您查查从前的例子吧。这种用法我不推荐。
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