OG13的一道题求解答

明溪竹子

104 Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.

(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,

(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

我想问的是，这个插入语in her book illustrations，对后面的coordinating有何作用？可以省略不看吗？因为只有人才能修饰coordinating

vi.len

你是在说A选项吗？如果不看illustrations的话，那them就没有指代的东西了啊。但是carefully coordinating them with her narratives,又是修饰BP的，所以A中BP之后的两个用逗号隔开的modifiers不clearly.

明溪竹子

vi.len 发表于 2016-8-12 22:29
你是在说A选项吗？如果不看illustrations的话，那them就没有指代的东西了啊。但是carefully coordinating t ...

它有没有就近修饰呢

vi.len

你是说carefully coordinating them with her narratives修饰in her book illustrations吗？那这样的话逻辑也不通啊。在她书本的插图中，将他们（插图）与叙述结合？应该是在书中，讲插图和叙述结合。

明溪竹子

vi.len 发表于 2016-8-13 18:47
你是说carefully coordinating them with her narratives修饰in her book illustrations吗？那这样的话逻辑 ...

所以，这个插入语错在哪呢

vi.len

所以A中BP之后的两个用逗号隔开的modifiers不clearly.

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我对E有疑惑。如果them不能指代in的宾语，为什么C选项的which就可以？
曼哈顿第五版指出，object pronouns can be the object of verbs/ pronouns.所以them是可以指代介词短语中的宾语部分。
但是我又感觉这是一个modifier,是可以去掉的部分，them就没有指代的对象了。求解！！！