关于And连接两个句子的时候， 看了ron大神的讲解还是有疑问

yoyoyoyo2015

看了Ron 10年5月3号的课， 有一道例题：

The largest trade-book publisher in the United States has announced the creation of a new digital imprint division, under which it will publish about 20 purely digital works to be sold online as either electronic books or downloadable copies that can be printed upon purchase.

A) Works to be sold online as either electronic books or
B) Works to sell them online, either as electronic books or
C) Works and it will sell them online as either electronic books or as
D) Works, and selling them online as either electronic books or as
E) Works, and it will sell them online either as electronic books or


BCD首先排除掉， 答案是A,  对于E, ron的解释是， 如果用AND连接两个句子， 暗示两个分句是独立的， 并且举例子：


(1) There was a great deal of traffic today, and i was late to work
(2) There was a great deal of traffic today, and THUS i was late to work


第一句表示traffic 不是我late的原因， 第二句traffic是我late 的原因。


我又看了manhattan prep 上RON 举得例子是：


[size=14.0084px]（1） [size=14.0084px]i have decided to take a new job, and i will make $100 per hour.
--> these don't make sense as "#1 and #2".
[size=14.0084px]（1）[size=14.0084px]i like my new job, and i make $100 per hour.
--> these do.


[size=14.007px]我感觉这两句好像都是错的， 都表达了新工作会带给我100/h, 有谁能解释一下。
[size=14.007px]还有例题里的E, 错误的原因是什么？？
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[size=14.007px]谢谢！！

vivi00

我觉得ron的意思可能是，and前加逗号，表示两个句子的意思上是没有关联的。

i have decided to take a new job, and i will make $100 per hour.  and 前后两句话意思相关，所以这里应该用and thus, 或者and前不加逗号。

i like my new job, and i make $100 per hour.这个句子中，and 前后的句子意思上没有衔接，所以这样用是对的。

E答案的either as ...or....平行出问题了，另外and it will前不应该加逗号

不知道这样的分析对不对

yoyoyoyo2015

vivi00 发表于 2016-6-6 08:30
我觉得ron的意思可能是，and前加逗号，表示两个句子的意思上是没有关联的。

i have decided to take a new ...

应该是像你说的这样， 谢谢！

feyonce

正好看到这里，不过视频上的选项E) Works, and it will sell them online as either electronic books or
选项A： the publisher will publish these works with a purpose of having them sold online. note clearly that this choice does not indicate who will sell the works.

（D) by using" and" the sentence simply presents the two as independent facts. This choice adds the information that the publisher will sell the works online. the information is not presented in the original sentence.

至于Ron的例子，在原帖的第2页有人阐述的很清楚
i have decide to take a new job,and i will make $ 100 per hour
the second clause should be subordinate to the first ，因为从语意上讲他们更应该是从属关系
i have decide to take a new job where i will make ...

I like my new job, and i make... （this give two facts: i like sth and i make sth)