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143 No field of study can advance significantly unless it incorporates knowledge and experience from outside that field.

在任何研究领域，除非有该领域之外的人引进他们的知识和经验，否则该领域就很难获得巨大的发展。

Will a field of inquiry witness great promotion without the knowledge and experience from outside? Only after analyzing the question roundly and logically can we answer to it. I would like to hold an opposed attitude to this issue in virtue of the following reasons:

To begin with, I have to admit that the incorporation of findings and principals in other subjects can play an important role in a field of study without any substantiated improvement for a long time.

Without the discovery of X-rays and the study of its unique characteristics we can never see its application in medicine. Without the study of birds wings and the structure of other flying creatures we can never see the huge machine flying above our heads. Without the needs of observation in micro-biology we can never acquire the equipment through which we discover the mystery of universe.

But, I strongly doubted that without the knowledge and experience from outside no big break through can be made, like the author suggests.

To have a better discussion on this issue, a clear definition is needed. When the outcome of a study shows great possibility of revolution in human lives or cast great doubt on the basic believes upon which a lot of things established, this kind of advance is regard as significant. And the help offered by other subjects shall not include basic mathematical and physical

knowledge.

As you can see, whether the outcome of a study is great depends on the influence and future meanings of it, instead of how it comes into being. For instance, famous ocean adventurer Nanson discover the difference between the direction of wind and that of the floe ice movement. Based on this accidentally observation, he made a great contribution to the promotion of oceanology by working out the theory about how sea water moves motivated by wind. The whole process of discovering and working it out is simply resulted by the observation without any help from the subjects outside oceanology.

Further more, if the statement is true that no big break through can be made unless it incorporates other experience and knowledge, then, naturally, any separation of field of inquiry should equals to the death announcement of it. And anyone who work in simply one area of study shouldn’t make any improvement. However, the circumstance depict above is the contrary of reality and common sense.

Finally, we can confidently draw the conclusion that while the degree of the knowledge from other subjects affect certain field of study is remained to be further discussed, it’s sure that significance advancement will occur with or without the help of “outside knowledge”.

122 The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.

了解一个社会特点的最好方法是，考察这个社会标榜的英雄人物和模范榜样的特点。

Will the character of the heroes and role models chosen by the society perfectly capture the features of one society, as the author stated? Only after analyzing the question roundly and logically can we answer to it. I would like to hold an apposed attitude to this issue in virtue of the following reasons.

To begin with, it’s hard to deny the fact that the characters of role models do represent certain qualities of a society. At least, they stand for the kind of people favored by the nation or the governors. Lei Feng, a soldier always helping others, is regard as a hero by the Chinese people. From which a vital quality, morality is viewed as the most important criteria of a person, of Chinese society is revealed.

What’s more, role models always been chosen by a society to shape or guide the young people, hoping for a change in the overall population toward a better future society. Thus the features reflected by the heroes are exactly the ideal state of future lifestyle.

But, it’s unjustified to analyze and understand a nation through merely study the role models. For they only represent the positive side and hopes of that nation.

First of all, people tend to throw away the dark side of social life and reality and make sure it doesn’t appear at the role models. That’s the result of choosing the heroes as the behavior guide of young people in the society. As soon as a person becomes role models, people are actually worshiping the person without the negative habits and qualities. Simply put, neither will the negative side of a person be chosen by leadership to guide the citizens nor will it become a part of ideal person worshiped by crowd.

Secondly, the character equipped by heroes may not be a character exists. As mentioned, role models represent a future hope instead of reality. We should say the best way to understand the character of the ideal situation of a society is to examine the character of heroes. The major roles in children stories will acquire the ability that children does not, likewise, role models will do a lot of things that normal people would never achieve. For heroes are just a huge and more complex fairy tale for adult world.

In short, we can firmly draw the conclusion that while the proper way of understanding a culture is remained to be further discussed, it’s clear that merely study the role models is not an reasonable method, due to the lack of negative qualities and the fake character a hero has.

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啥叫future hope
看着有点痛苦的感觉啊