第一次写，不知道怎么样

oliver旸

Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field.  批判性的判断在任何领域当中都是没什么用处的，除非判断来自于该领域专家。

Is it a reasonable way to regard the comments and critics come from the expert in that field as the only one valuable? Only after analyzing the question logically and roundly can we answer to it.

To begin with, it’s hard to deny the fact that critics from professors and experts make a great contribution to reveal some problems. When the governors plan to put down the ancient walls surrounding my hometown, it’s the advice from the school of reservation of ancient buildings rile up a discussion about the preservation of cultural relics. Consequently, the plan to break the wall down is substituted for refreshing the old walls so that they can stand there longer.

Further more, the criteria based on which we judge a certain comment is valuable should be defined as follow: the suggestion and critics are supported by scientific validation and we believe the advantages will far out weigh the disadvantages once the plan carried out. Obviously, the critics and comments proposed by experts would more likely to be valuable.

But, I can not agree with the statement regarding any advice or comments without a support from experts meaningless.

As stated above, the definition of a productive and meaningful judgment depends on the basic assumption and the predictable results of it. We can’t just simply deny the possibility of valuable judgment by beginners. In fact, unique perspectives and fresh ideas always come from the brain of creative young adults.it’s true that beginners lack experience and have a less sensitivity to problems. But that does not necessarily means they don’t have a chance to propose a valuable judgment.

What’s more, is it save to say that experts will never make mistakes?

Common sense and experience tell us that every person will commit mistakes even if the kind they never think to make before. Both beginners and experienced experts can be wrong. Therefore, I recommend that we accept advice and comments from all walk of lives. The more the different kinds of judgment we receive the more blind spots we can avoid. As is known to all, the different advice serve as a check on other comments. Through carefully look into the cases of each comments, the false part of the critical judgment is picked out.

In conclusion, we can firmly say that the critical judgment from experts are not the only one valuable. According to the analysis made above, it’s reasonable to take advice from all kinds of people into account.