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TWE108(贴上了很久但一直没有被评过,31号就考,麻烦大家给打个分,谢谢)

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发表于 2005-8-11 05:41:00 | 只看该作者

TWE108(贴上了很久但一直没有被评过,31号就考,麻烦大家给打个分,谢谢)

Some people believe that the best way of learing about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do upi think is preferable?


Today, there are so many debates about the issue of how to learn about life. Some people hold the opion that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Others, however, believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. In my point of view, I would like to take both of them when learn about life.


Listening to the advice of family and friends is a good way to learn about life. Since, the family members like the elders have more experience than others. They have been gone through the period of teenagers already. They could tell younger ones the better way to take their lives. And, learning about life from friends is also recommendable. Teenagers always have the same questions about life, and will love to find answers from friends. That makes a circumstance of learning about life, they could change opinions to each other, and get the best way of learning about their lives.


However, through personal experience is also a good way to learn about life. Life is individual to everyone. No one could really dicides other people's life. Each person has to learn his or her own life through personal experience. Although other people's advice are sometimes useful and sounds perfect, each one has to try and find the right way by own experience. Through personal experience, people could find the flaws about their lives and correct them. This could not be done by only listening to other people's advice. Live is a process of doing. Only after doing, it could be corrected and better.


Therefore, Listening to the advice of family and friends, and through personal experience are both good ways of learing about life. People should not take other people's advice without trying, or through his or her own life without kind advice. The right way of learning about life is to finely combine the both ways together. Take the good advice from family or friends, and actually try them to figure out the best fitting one.


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沙发
发表于 2005-8-13 22:58:00 | 只看该作者
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2005-8-17 22:02:00 | 只看该作者

救命啊 31号考

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2005-8-19 07:39:00 | 只看该作者
自己顶一下
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发表于 2005-8-19 10:26:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用lemonlime在2005-8-11 5:41:00的发言:

Some people believe that the best way of learing about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do upi think is preferable?


Today, there are so many debates about the issue of how to learn about life. Some people hold the opion that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Others, however, believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. In my point of view, I would like to take both of them when learn about life.


Listening to the advice of family and friends is a good way to learn about life. Since, (逗号多余)the family members like the elders have more experience than others. They have been gone through the period of teenagers(their own teenager) already. They could tell younger ones the better way to take their lives. And, learning about life from friends is also recommendable. Teenagers always have the same questions about life, and will love to find answers from friends. That makes a circumstance of learning about life, they could change opinions to each other, and get the best way of learning about their lives. 学会用peers, share, discuss, exchange, have much in common...


However, through personal experience is also a good way to learn about life(此句不通。Learning about life through personal experience is also indispensable.). Life is individual to everyone. No one could really dicides other people's life. Each person has to learn his or her own life through personal experience. Although other people's advice are(注意主谓一致) sometimes useful and sounds perfect, each one has to try and find the right way by own experience. (没想到用unique一词?)Through personal experience, people could find the flaws about their lives and correct them. This could not be done by only listening to other people's advice. Live is a process of doing. Only after doing, it could be corrected and better.(看了头大,中式英文,doing 是什么?it又是什么?)


Therefore, Listening to the advice of family and friends, and through personal experience (这个不能作主语滴are both good ways of learing about life. People should not take other people's advice without trying(practicing), or through his or her own life ()without kind advice. The right way of learning about life is to finely combine the both ways together. Take the good advice from family or friends, and actually try them to figure out the best fitting one.



有进步,但还要努力呀。感觉你有些地方写得太随意了,整个一中译英。写完了自己一定要认真看一看读一读,有些表达上的问题是很容易自己发现并改正的。

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 楼主| 发表于 2005-8-19 22:07:00 | 只看该作者
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