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dabao917

     Do you agree or disagree that parents are the best teachers?

   Whether parents are the best teacher or not? depending on personal experience and

emotional concern ,we may find that some people choose  the idea of that parents are the

best teacher, on the other hand, some people may hold the idea of parents are not the best

parents instead. the choice, nevertheless, is hard to make, however, from my point of view, I will

agree that former is more reasonable. my arguments are listed as follow

   the essential reason can be seen by everyone is that parents can teach us a lots of

basic skills that the teacher can not teach. For example. when i was 10 years ago ,my parents

instructed  me how to cook ,how to clean my clothes, and how to cooperatewith my friends to

archive a common goal. with those skills ,i can easily to live in the society without any

problem(puzzle) and brought me a bright future. do you think example quoted above are very persuasive?

   another heat and chief reason is that parents know us much more than that of the teacher.

they know our merit and demerit in detail .they  spends all their energy to help us to get rid of

our disadvantage. and develop our advantage in the right way.  for instance. since i played

well at football ,they send me to a football school. as a result ,i finally become a

well-known football player in my town .thank to my parents. if you can see that ,you can

understand it more deeply.

   of course, parents have few of academic knowledge when we faced some problem such as

physics, history and so on, it is hard for them to teach us .meanwhile, they can try their best

to teach us without any complaint. so the striking conclusion is  obvious.

   to sum up, given the reason discussed above, we can safety come to the conclusion that

parents are the best teacher.  

dabao917

为什么没有人帮我看一下阿？

farsuccess

为什么每句开头单词字母不大写，另外你的分段好乱呀，我COPY下来，先重新排了排，才能开始看。希望以后能改改。

dabao917

This is a headed issue about weather live in a small town or live in a big city depending on personal experience and emotional concern ,wan can find that some people hold the idea of live in a small town. On the other hand, some people may choose the idea of live in a big city instead. the choose ,nevertheless, is hard to make. however, from my point of view ,i will agree that latter is more personable. my arguments are listed as follow

  The essential reason can be seen by everyone is that live in a big city having more job opportunities(opportunity) than those of the counterpart. as we all know, in a small town ,there are just few job opportunities. an increasing of people in the small town must spend all their energy and time in a never-ending struggle for the food and thus suffer a great deal of ailment due to heavy workload. they have no choice but to work long hours for a little pay. on the contrary, in a big city, they can find a lots of job. for example, they can go to a big company and gain a vast proportion of money to supply a well-being live in the future. If you can see that, you can understand it more deeply.

Convenience is another head and chief reason that i have chosen to put here. and i could like to in here explain a important ones. there is no denying that big city have many shopping mall, and cinema .we can go to shopping with my friends on the weekend and buy many useful basic things and beautiful clothes. When we have a little pressure that comes from study or work, we can go to the cinema to look some well-knowing films to relax ourselves. do you think these example quoted above are very persuasive?

Of course, live in a small town have somewhat merit as well. there are many fresh air in the outdoors .and people in the small town know each other and willing to help them. In addition, the demerit of live in a small town are more obvious such as the limit of education. so the most striking conclusion are obvious.

But if all those factors are considered, the advantage of live in a small town take more weight than those of counterpart .To sum up, given the reason discussed , we can safety come to the conclusion that live in a big city is a wise choice.

dabao917

难道就没有人办我改吗？

farsuccess

我想别人也是这样，想改，但是错词太多，句子也太乱，没有办法改。我建议你能自己先将这篇文章放在WORD中，看看WORD怎么看你的语法和句式错误。在自己多次修改之后，再贴上来让大家改，大家都不愿意为一些词和句式的简单错误去一一修改，都希望是能提出对别人句子或理由的完善。

非常抱歉！

pumpkin

What is the number of the TOPIC? Please make it clear in the title of your post, Thank you.