OG 16 SC 第13题

大羊

13.Although Alice Walker published a number of essays, poetry collections, and stories during the 1970s, her third novel, The Color Purple, which was published in 1982, brought her the widest acclaim in that it won both the National Book Award as well as the Pulitzer Prize.

(A) which was published in 1982, brought her the widest acclaim in that it won both the National Book Award as well as the Pulitzer Prize

(B) published in 1982, bringing her the widest acclaim by winning both the National Book Award and the Pulitzer Prize

(C) published in 1982, brought her the widest acclaim, winning both the National Book Award and the Pulitzer Prize

(D) was published in 1982 and which, winning both the National Book Award and the Pulitzer Prize, brought her the widest acclaim

(E) was published in 1982, winning both the National Book Award as well as the Pulitzer Prize, and bringing her the widest acclaim. .

这一题正确答案是C 我可以理解 其他选项我也懂 但是这里的D 除去它与原句项表达的转折意思不符以外，还有其他错吗？这里的which我十分不理解  哪里inappropriate了， 求大神解释

og解释为

D the use of which is inappropriate here; although it would still be rhetorically inferior to the correct answer(C), this version would be acceptable if the word which were deleted.

大羊

自己顶一个 求NN解释

nrwl

D选项，前面用and which，....and the Pulizer Prize 。这样的并列不符合and的parallelism的要求；