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11#
发表于 2006-1-11 16:41:00 | 只看该作者

D:....smaller,less distinctive,and less in demand


E:the decrease (n.) in size,less distinctive,and less in demand------unparallel


Thus ,D is correct

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发表于 2006-11-1 16:45:00 | 只看该作者

D

全句的主语是increasing demands,原句的大致意思是:这个demands可以改变Apalachicola湾的含盐量,这会改变牡蛎的味道,并且使得它们(我没查字典,不知道翻的准不准,不过大致是这个意思)

从句意可以看出,是这个港湾含盐量的改变导致了牡蛎在味道、大小、需求量等方面的变化。这正是D用两个伴随状语所表达的意思。

如果选CC里的robalter并列,making做伴随状语,表robalter两者的结果。那么,意思就变成了:不断增长的需求导致了这个港湾含盐量的改变及牡蛎味道的变化,这两种变化导致了牡蛎在大小、需求量等方面的变化。
        
注意红体字部分,其中,含盐量的改变导致牡蛎大小的变化的确有理,但是味道的变化导致牡蛎大小的变化显然不合逻辑,所以C不正确

分析的很有道理

13#
发表于 2006-12-9 12:38:00 | 只看该作者
thanks
14#
发表于 2009-4-19 12:57:00 | 只看该作者

up

15#
发表于 2009-12-29 11:10:05 | 只看该作者
看来做题还是要慢一些
16#
发表于 2010-2-23 10:57:25 | 只看该作者
ding
17#
发表于 2010-2-23 12:09:23 | 只看该作者
ding D
18#
发表于 2010-2-23 13:58:21 | 只看该作者
应该是选D吧
19#
发表于 2014-2-13 19:14:50 | 只看该作者
applemouse 发表于 2005-9-2 12:38
昨天跟同学讨论这题,他认为是D。我觉得也挺有道理的,我把他的理由粘贴在这里,请大家帮忙看下。NN们快来 ...

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20#
发表于 2016-11-25 10:26:54 | 只看该作者
Correct Answer: D
Parallelism; Grammatical construction
The sentence claims that demands for river water may change the saline content of the bay, possibly altering the flavor and size of oysters there and diminishing the oysters’ marketability. The sentence is not parallel. It should read which would rob the oysters . . . and make them decrease to be parallel and grammatical. The series of three phrases after make them that describes what will happen to the oysters also needs to be parallel.

A   The referent of the relative pronoun, which, is ambiguous; the two effects of altered saline content are not expressed in parallel form, with a relative clause expressing the first effect, and an infinitive phrase expressing the second.
B   The referent of the pronoun it is ambiguous. Also, the effects of the bay’s altered saline content are not expressed in parallel form—the first being an independent clause and the second a verb phrase.
C   The comma before the conjunction and signals that an independent clause will follow and, but a verb phrase follows instead. The series of phrases following making them lacks appropriate parallelism.
D   Correct. The potential effects on the oysters are expressed by two parallel participial phrases, the second of which lists three adjectives correctly in a series.
E   The series of phrases following making them lacks appropriate parallelism.不平行 如果and前加逗号 则后面需要和making平行的结构 ,and making·····,making····
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