[求助]急，3天后要考了，还不会写issue，自己练了一篇，请大n们指点一下

z520m

Someone will adovcate preserving historic building to retend the history of the city while ohers will contend seting up more modern buildings by breaking down old bulidings. In my opinion, some of historic buliding should be returned yet some of old buildings should be removed to enourage modern experience. I have two reasons for my opinion.
In the first place, some historic bulidings are valuable to a city even a country, so they shoud not be removed for any reasons. Each country have its unique culture and own building style. Some buildings are the representives of one country's buliding style and some buildings are the place that a famous historical incidence occured. Therefore, these kind of cruical buildings for a country's history properly cannot be broke down.
In the second place, a lot of buildings are old buildings. what are boildings? In my view, the old buildings are the buildings that are bulit many years ago and outmoded. These kind of buildings lack the necessary accomadation for its livers and aren't suitable for current people to live in. For example, long-history cities have a lot of old builings in its development and now don't need the useless builings. To improve the living condition and city impperssion, these kinds of old and outdated buildings should be removed from the cities ans used to encourage modern buildings suitable to citizens.
In conclution, whether the historic buildings shoud be removed or returned depends on the qulity, histical meaning  and culture-bound respentive of the dwellings. That is, if a building is historical bulidings, it shoud be there all the time. If not, the old building is unvaluable, useless and uncomfortable for citizen and unapplicable for the modern and therefore should be removed.

第一次写的，用了29分钟，不怎么样，请大n指点。

1请问我这样的文章属于什么分数段？

2论点有没有问题？是不是可以同意一半，打击一半？

3词汇量很小，写不好句子，有问题又不知在哪，请指点迷津。

4字数288，够吗？

麻烦了。

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-7-9 22:03:40编辑过]

judydongxueni

以下是引用z520m在2005-7-9 22:02:00的发言：

Someone will adovcate preserving historic building to retend the history of the city while ohers will contend seting up more modern buildings by breaking down old bulidings. In my opinion, some of historic buliding should be returned yet some of old buildings should be removed to enourage modern experience. I have two reasons for my opinion.
In the first place, some historic bulidings are valuable to a city even a country, so they shoud not be removed for any reasons. Each country have its unique culture and own building style. Some buildings are the representives of one country's buliding style and some buildings are the place that a famous historical incidence occured. Therefore, these kind of cruical buildings for a country's history properly cannot be broke down.
In the second place, a lot of buildings are old buildings. what are boildings? In my view, the old buildings are the buildings that are bulit many years ago and outmoded. These kind of buildings lack the necessary accomadation for its livers and aren't suitable for current people to live in. For example, long-history cities have a lot of old builings in its development and now don't need the useless builings. To improve the living condition and city impperssion, these kinds of old and outdated buildings should be removed from the cities ans used to encourage modern buildings suitable to citizens.
In conclution, whether the historic buildings shoud be removed or returned depends on the qulity, histical meaning  and culture-bound respentive of the dwellings. That is, if a building is historical bulidings, it shoud be there all the time. If not, the old building is unvaluable, useless and uncomfortable for citizen and unapplicable for the modern and therefore should be removed.

第一次写的，用了29分钟，不怎么样，请大n指点。

怎么才开始写作文啊？不过第一次这样也还可以了。

1请问我这样的文章属于什么分数段？

这个问题没法答

2论点有没有问题？是不是可以同意一半，打击一半？

当然可以，只要言之有理

3词汇量很小，写不好句子，有问题又不知在哪，请指点迷津。

词汇量和句式已经不可能在这几天突破了。你可以做的就是注意拼写，主谓一致，单复数。背一下精华里tonyGG的模版

4字数288，够吗？

不够也没办法了，你还剩2天了。不要想那么多。只要你写出来的东西好，字数不是绝对的。

麻烦了。

真是牛人啊，才看作文

z520m

多谢斑竹指点，因为时间来不及了，所以一直没看作文，还想问一下就是一般作文规定要写多少words?我尽量努力。

还请问一下，tongGG的精华贴在哪啊？没找到？真的麻烦斑竹了

[此贴子已经被作者于2005-7-10 11:15:03编辑过]

judydongxueni

http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?BoardID=26&ID=113212&replyID=&skin=0

应该要400字比较好