OG16 SC 63 关于这种“三明治”式的句子解释整理

jessicamss

63. Having been named for a mythological nymph who cared for the infant Jupiter, the asteroid named Ida, in the middle of the belt of asteroids that orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter, was discovered in 1884.

(A) Having been named for a mythological nymph who cared for the infant Jupiter, the asteroid named Ida, in the middle of the belt of asteroids that orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter, was discovered in 1884.

(B) Discovered in 1884, the asteroid Ida, named for a mythological nymph who cared for the infant Jupiter, is in the middle of the belt of asteroids that orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter.

(C) In the middle of the belt of asteroids that orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter, the asteroid Ida, discovered in 1884 and named for a mythological nymph who cared for the infant Jupiter.

(D) The asteroid Ida, named for a mythological nymph who cared for the infant Jupiter and discovered in 1884, is in the middle of the belt of asteroids to orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter.

(E) Ida, an asteroid discovered in 1884 and which was named for a mythological nymph who cared for the infant Jupiter, is in the middle of the belt of asteroids to orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter

OA: B

整理的时候发现是新题，第一次做错了，其实是having been 这里的用法我不是很明白，所以结合国外网站的帖子（主要是这个帖子内容）整理了一下，在之前同学的帖子上也贴了，为了好找一些我就另开一帖。

我是想找一下A 选项的having been 的错误，觉得用wordy 来笼统解释说服不了我啊

首先整理回答我自己的问题 A的having been的错误，帖子是这么说的：
Having Been creates a timeline in the past which refers that Action A happens before Action B in the past.
Here it means -
Naming the mythological Nymph------------Discovery of the asteroid named IDA.

所以命名的这个action是早于主语中的发现discovery 的action，这样一说，我觉得我接受了。

再是关于这种类型的题目，帖子总结到是“三明治”句子，给了一些怎么处理这种句子的建议：
The first thought in such sandwiched sentences is to decide the chronology of the events. The discovery is the first event and hence has to be described first with a modifier status. Then is the naming phenomenon, so push this incidental info to the next in another modifier. The third most important point is what it is doing and where it is doing at the moment. Give this most important factor a verb status.

其实我个人感觉他这样说有一点点马后炮，哈哈，原因是他的规则解释是完全往这个正确句子的chronology上靠的。但是分析一下B 这个正确的选项，感觉他说的还是挺有道理的：
Discovered in 1884, the asteroid Ida, named for a mythological nymph who cared for the infant Jupiter, is in the middle of the belt of asteroids that orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter.

可以看出来B选项是按照逻辑顺序从过去到现在来构句的： 首先是1884年被发现，再被命名，再是表述Ida 星是处在太阳和火星、木星绕着的星云带中间。
这样两个modifiers 按照时间顺序在前，句子的core 在后。

C,D,E 选项错误帖子分析如下： 把各个句子拆分指出哪里有问题：
(C) In the middle of the belt of asteroids that orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter, the asteroid Ida, discovered in 1884 and named for a mythological nymph who cared for the infant Jupiter.
Seems like a jumbled sentence - Wordy and Awkward.

(D) The asteroid Ida, named for a mythological nymph who cared for the infant Jupiter and discovered in 1884, is in the middle of the belt of asteroids to orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter.

Incorrect. ( highlighted portions)

(E) Ida, an asteroid discovered in 1884 and which was named for a mythological nymph who cared for the infant Jupiter, is in the middle of the belt of asteroids to orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter
Incorrect ( highlighted portions)

原帖在此：
http://gmatclub.com/forum/having-been-named-for-a-mythological-nymph-205139.html?fl=homea

看到这样的长句子，感觉还是不要怕，梳理chronology 和找到句子的core 是关键。 不过作为备考者来说，75s中能找到这些关键点还挺考验能力的，我第一次做的时候估计就是被密密麻麻的五个选项弄烦了于是语感选了一个吧。。。


大家一起讨论哈！谢谢！

mollywww

分析好棒！

葫芦屯屯委书记

点赞，辛苦楼主从gmatclub上总结啦

不喜欢乱起名字

感谢楼主！我还是有一点不懂， 就是 Ida, an asteroid discovered in 1884 and which was named for a mythological nymph who cared for the infant Jupiter, is in the middle of the belt of asteroids to orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter 不能用to orbit 是因为to be表示目的， 所以这题不正确么？谢谢！！

不喜欢乱起名字

还有A选项，having been 不是表示现在完成时吗， 而 was discovered 是一般过去式， 这样name这个动作不是还是晚于discover这个动作的吗？

fesche

命名发生在discover之后，所以不应该用现在完成时。

另外CD都没有谓语，直接排除

剩下B和E，to orbit这个是强调这个动作的目的性，但是这个Ida并不是有目的的orbit，所以排除。我觉得E另外的问题是and which was named 这里，如果and并列成分后面有个which，相对应的前面也要有个which呢，这是我排除E的原因，求指正

bbc94

感谢分享！               

会飞的天天

我有一个额外的有点傻的问题，is in the middle of the belt of asteroids that orbit the Sun between Mars and Jupiter.这一段中， between Mars and Jupiter 这种介词短语是就近修饰名词（sun）还是belt of asteriod这个belt啊，当时做题的时候就有点点小疑问 。 谢谢大佬们解答

lisa001

会飞的天天 发表于 2018-5-27 11:39
我有一个额外的有点傻的问题，is in the middle of the belt of asteroids that orbit the Sun between Mar ...

显然asteroids，太阳不可能在火星和木星之间 ，between M and J是介词短语。