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qinxing

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Although some people think that parents are not the best teachers, different people would have different opinions because of their different backgrounds. As far as I am concerned, I believe that parents are the best teachers. I will illustrate my views by following discussion.

First of all, we have lived together with parents when we born and parents have given us a lot of knowledge. Before we are independent, we learn a lot of knowledge from parents. Even we grow up; we still ask our parents opinion when we confront troubles. For example, we learn the basic language from parents. Like mom, and father.

Secondly, parents are the most closed friends to us. In any situation, parents will give us all the knowledge and never keep any information. They hope their children can be the smartest people in the world.

Last but not least, parents know us better than anyone else because we have accompanied the most of time with parents. They know us very much so they can give us a lot of useful advice and help us to deal with problems.

In conclusion, based on the reasons that I presented, I strongly believe parents are the best teachers. We have learned a lot of knowledge from our parents

zikineko

1.      字数要再增加

2.      我怎么感觉首段第一句就怪怪的，降写不太好吧！

3.      增加例子

qinxing

谢谢，我会越写越好的。