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Twe002 請大家給分數吧.....

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发表于 2005-4-13 07:23:00 | 只看该作者

Twe002 請大家給分數吧.....

請大家評一下....我的英文不太好....
我可以得多少分?


Whether parents are the best teacher is a controversial topic today. Different people hold different opinions due to their personal experience. In my point of view, if I were faced with this question, I would probably disagree with the topic statement. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.



The first reason why I disagree with the topic statement is that parents are not always suitable to be the best teacher. Facts witness and present many examples, some parents may say to their children that " Don't say nasty things about so and so, and then their children hear them saying their friend's bad things with their neighbor. Don't you think that this example is very persuasive?



Another indisputable reason is that some parents are not qualified to be a teacher. Teaching children are not only by their words, but also by their actions. Of course, there are many examples can support my opinion. Some parents like smoking, gambling and drinking. Perhaps, they may think that those bad habits would not influence their children, but many researchers say that children are easily influenced by their parents. Therefore, they learn their bad habits and think those things are common. If you can see it, you will understand it deeply.



Finally, I believe that parents sometimes are our best teacher. For instance, their personal experience is children's treasure, and it can deeply help their children by telling them how to live their life is the best way. Nevertheless, parents are not always right, and they may have many bad habits. Thereby reaching the conclusion is easy.



In conclusion, it is true that whether parents are the best teacher is still not answered. But it can be only a matter of time in the future, I think.

沙发
发表于 2005-4-14 00:01:00 | 只看该作者
4至5分吧,(随便说说,别当真哦)第一个理由段和结尾写得不太好。
板凳
发表于 2005-4-14 06:15:00 | 只看该作者
sometimes you don't need the conclusion. Clear explaination in each paragraph is enough, but if you have nothing to say, you may need the conclusion to add more words.
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