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cathyzimu

33. You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy?

Everyone in this world likes to receive a gift especially a gift of money. As for me, maybe it is not a tough choice to decide how to spend this gift of money. I can, of course, buy some things I am eager for, such as a beautiful piece of jewelry , an excellent concert ticket and anything else that can make me feel enjoyable and satisfied with.

To use this gifted money more meaningfully, however, I think I should take a serious consideration. Man may always remember impressively how he feels when he receives birthday gifts from parents and friends on his birthday every year. Not only do these precious presents make him happy, but also their loves make him feel touched. Sometimes sharing one’s precious gifts with other people is the most enjoyable thing, like the birthday presents bring happiness both to her or him and to her or his parents and friends. Thus, if were given a gift of money, I would buy a piece of jewelry for my mother. In the first place, mother is great in this world for she devotes herself to her family and her children, and I would like to send her a beautiful and precious piece of jewelry , which represents my love and respect to her. Besides, since I now live so far away from my mother and I am not able to live with her so often, I suppose, this jewelry could bring happy memory to my mother and relieve her miss.

Although the concert ticket is also tempting to me, especially I am a music lover and I appreciate listening to music after all day work, the happiness and comfort from my former choice is far beyond the latter one.

In a word, only when you share your gifts and happiness with others, you can acquire the best gift and happiness. So remember, if you want to be happy, share your happiness with others.

cathyzimu

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以下是引用cathyzimu在2005-3-29 20:05:00的发言：

33. You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy?

Everyone in this world likes to receive a gift especially a gift of money. As for me, maybe it is not a tough choice to decide how to spend this gift of money. I can, of course, buy some things I am eager for, such as a beautiful piece of jewelry , an excellent concert ticket and anything else that can make me feel enjoyable and satisfied with.

To use this gifted money more meaningfully, however, I think I should take a serious consideration. Man may always remember impressively how he feels when he receives birthday gifts from parents and friends on his birthday every year. Not only do these precious presents make him happy, but also their loves make him feel touched. Sometimes sharing one’s precious gifts with other people is the most enjoyable thing, like the birthday presents bring happiness both to her or him and to her or his parents and friends. Thus, if were given a gift of money, I would buy a piece of jewelry for my mother. In the first place, mother is great in this world for she devotes herself to her family and her children, and I would like to send her a beautiful and precious piece of jewelry , which represents my love and respect to her. Besides, since I now live so far away from my mother and I am not able to live with her so often, I suppose, this jewelry could bring happy memory to my mother and relieve her miss.

Although the concert ticket is also tempting to me, especially I am a music lover and I appreciate listening to music after all day work, the happiness and comfort from my former choice is far beyond the latter one.

In a word, only when you share your gifts and happiness with others, you can acquire the best gift and happiness. So remember, if you want to be happy, share your happiness with others.

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