写作“Why School”文书的方法 The answer to "HOW DO I WRITE THE “WHY SCHOOL X” ESSAY?

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Hi Jon,

Sorry to bother you. I still have some questions and really need your help. I just sent you a friend request and could you please add me asap?

I am applying to master program at universities in the US. I have completed two different versions of "why school" essay but don't know which one is better organized.

Could you give me some advice?