[求助]184,第一次写,请多指教.

melodybb1224

184.Some students prefer to study alone.Others prefer to study with a group of students.which would you prefer?

Depending on personal experience and emotional concern, some students prefer to study alone; on the other hand, others prefer to study with a group of students. From my point of view, I would agree with the later opinion. There are many reasons I think are very forehead in the following discussion. I would like to reason and provide evidence to supply my reasons.

The essential reason can be seen by everyone is that when you study with a group of students; you can get a lot of knowledge from them. Firstly, if you meet some troubles in your study while there is a student knows the way of solve the problem, so you can ask him how to deal with the problem. Suppose that when you study alone, how you can get the help from others. Furthermore,

Discussing with the students can also give you some new and creative minds. For example, I always study with my classmates, the most benefits I get are that I can know many different ideas about the same question, some are creative, others are logical only when we communicate with each other. Don’t you think the example I quoted above are very persuasive.

Another reason of my propensity is that study with a group of students can let you know some interpersonal skills .You can know how to communicate to others with a proper way because when you study with them, you must talk to them in a good manner to keep a good relationship with them, otherwise, they will not stay with you. Besides, you can learn how to cooperate with others. It is an important character in future life and work. Therefore, only when you study with other students, can you learn these interpersonal skills.

Although there are couples of advantages of studying alone such as independent, quiet. But study with a group of students carries more weight than the former one. Thus study with a group of students has more obvious benefits.

To sum up, study with a group of students can let you know a lot of knowledge ,teach you how to communicate and cooperate. In a word, I prefer to study with a group of students.

melodybb1224

实在抱歉,没想到字这末小.

melodybb1224

Depending on personal experience and emotional concern, some students prefer to study alone; on the other hand, others prefer to study with a group of students. From my point of view, I would agree with the later opinion. There are many reasons I think are very forehead in the following discussion. I would like to reason and provide evidence to supply my reasons.

The essential reason can be seen by everyone is that when you study with a group of students; you can get a lot of knowledge from them. Firstly, if you meet some troubles in your study while there is a student knows the way of solve the problem, so you can ask him how to deal with the problem. Suppose that when you study alone, how you can get the help from others. Furthermore,

Discussing with the students can also give you some new and creative minds. For example, I always study with my classmates, the most benefits I get are that I can know many different ideas about the same question, some are creative, others are logical only when we communicate with each other. Don’t you think the example I quoted above are very persuasive.

Another reason of my propensity is that study with a group of students can let you know some interpersonal skills .You can know how to communicate to others with a proper way because when you study with them, you must talk to them in a good manner to keep a good relationship with them, otherwise, they will not stay with you. Besides, you can learn how to cooperate with others. It is an important character in future life and work. Therefore, only when you study with other students, can you learn these interpersonal skills.

Although there are couples of advantages of studying alone such as independent, quiet. But study with a group of students carries more weight than the former one. Thus study with a group of students has more obvious benefits.

To sum up, study with a group of students can let you know a lot of knowledge ,teach you how to communicate and cooperate. In a word, I prefer to study with a group of students.

phoenixbad

只看了前两段,觉得似乎有摸板痕迹,有点复杂化哈

另外第一段的later似乎改为latter,第二段的deal with似乎有点过,觉得用solve就行了吧,个人意见哈

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