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创造辉煌

   题目：   People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
  I fundamentally agree with the speaker’scontention, -Forces are more crucial than people’smakingto determinetheir behavior-,in virtue of the facts in two aspects,I will analyse the proposition systematically.

On the one hand, there is no denying the fact that people’s behavior are largely determined by forces. Firstly, at the philosophicalangle ,human’sbehavior’sare ruled by the common merit of our society,sometimes by means of law,rules and responsibility ,etc;Anyone who breaks the rules must be heavily punished,we all know there happens a president’sscandal called Watergate;Secondly,in order to remain the social stable and prevent civil’sprivate property violated ,it’s essentiaf to address the rule with the help of forces;Finally, a researchshowsthathumanbehaviorincreasinglystemsfromhumanthinking, especiallycognitionandthecreationofmeaning. Inthecognitiveframework, human behavioris inextricably tied tothinking.

On the other hand, despite the merit of the speaker’s claims, however, I disagree with the statement that forces have the conclusive influenceonhuman’sbehavior ,it seems that the speaker fails to take the people’s inner heart into consideration ;In my personal opinion, the truly leading effect of people’sbehavioris our inner heart ,nevertheless, not the forces or the environment; When we are hesitated to do something or not to do something, our decision are perhaps influenced by our environment ,however, at most of time,we will make up our mind to follow our inner heart.After the truth comes from what we think.

Moreover, the standard of evaluating a person is inflexible, inner-directed enough is to see whether the person is strong-minded guy ,to follow his inner heart, admittedly that, not to drift along; Since the man in the history who make the big deal have an unique thoughts and visions, and can considerate further than ordinary people, which shows that they predict what will happen in future. When peers were glancing at contemporary matters, Harwardstudents Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg droped out from school, were on the way to creat their IT empire, which both Microsoft and Facebook evoluted this field and are heavily influencing normal lifestyle.

Furthermore, the people’sbehavior drived by the outside environment will unabiding , if people have made unwilling decisions before,it may just fulfill the public’s need,however,it’s not his own thought; At my personal level, only when the outside forced can transmitted into the inner thought,can people form the personal responsibility to make every decision.

From the analysis made above, I strongly commit to the optimal notion that we need seek a balance and an all-sided consideration; without the forces, we will not make our decision quickly under the pressure, but if without our inner thoughts, we are not bound to feel at ease to make decisions.So that it’s imperative just follow our heart.

创造辉煌

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怎么说~没仔细看~看了每段开头的单词就抖了下~懂吧，i.e 有点四六级的味道~~呵呵~~don't take it personal 哦~~