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Going to concert or getting the jewelry?

Choosing form music concert tickets and jewelry is a little difficult decision for me to make because both of them seem irresistible for a lady. However, I prefer use that money to purchase tickets to a concert if I have to select one from those two.

Listening to music at concert always touch my heart and give me impressing memory, which is a kind of spiritual enjoyment I could obtain comparatively few from jewelry. I used to be a chorus member of our university and I have attended many music concerts, such as jazz music concert from a college band from USA and classic music concert from symphony orchestra of our province. Every time I came back from concert, I found I was so joyful in my heart, sometimes even last the whole week. It still makes me feel so delightful when I just recall such kind of experience. Although wearing jewelry also could make me happy and look more beautiful, maybe, the touching and resonance in mind is more attractive for me.

 

The second reason is that concert is relatively rare and sometimes you have to wait for so long for the coming of your favorite band. However, jewelry seems always being in the store readily for purchase. When I was in high school, I was so fascinated by the Back Street Boy which is a pop band from America. I would definitely buy the concert tickets if they could come to hold a show in our city. In fact, they did not visit our city. Not liking jewelry, concert is not kind of product you could buy whenever you want. So if there is any concert I have been longing for becoming available, I will attend it.

 

Another factor I like about the concert is that I could attend it with my friends or family. Friends (families) getting together is always so much fun: talking, laughing, taking photos and sharing stories, etc. Attending concert is a good way I could spend time with my friends (families). I think it is so romantic to go to concert with my boyfriend. By sharing the feeling about concert, our relationship maybe progress. As for jewelry, it is better for a man to purchase them for his loved lady, not the girl buying them for herself, I guess.

 

All in all, I would like to use the money to buy the tickets of a concert I want to attend rather than a piece of jewelries.