ESSAY中如何表明自己的GT成绩的弱势

gaotao

这几天在赶最后的几个学校,由于前面的申请计划遭到很多不可抗力的影响,导致成果非常不理想,现在遇到了一个问题,这几天拿出以前自己学的ESSAY,看看，结合自己的GT成绩,有点不太理想,没有太大的竞争力,但是眼下去考已经来不及了，想补充一下以前没有写到的,请问大家,怎么样的位置和篇幅来阐述这个问题为好?

比如:把拉把拉把拉,(工作很忙,业务出色),但是在这一阶段，我却没有充裕的时间去准备我的GT,

这样点到不知道够不够了?

yaoyao99

Not sure.  Might come off as an excuse.  I would focus on your professional accomplishments instead of using them to explain your GMAT scores.

明尼蘇達

我也是G很差, so 我在Optional Essay 有解釋了一下( 就工作超忙). 你參考看看.

My personal philosophy is this:

View each company as my own company.

 

I maintain a good relationship with all the companies that I have worked for in the past.  I enjoy my work even though it demands quite a bit of time.  I feel that my professional life so far has been a success.  We managed to create revenue of $1.1 million dollars in 2006 and expect to reach a record $8.1 million in 2007 for this Japan Sales Division.  We currently receive orders from Sanyo DSC, Sony DSC, Panasonic TV, Sharp, Canon, Epson, and Brother plus many other Japanese customers. 

I admit that my test taking abilities may not be up to the same level as other students but success in the business world is created through communication and teamwork.  I believe that during my on-campus interviews in August 2005 and 2006 that I have demonstrated my communication ability.  Through my work experience my teamwork skills have been made visible. 

zouzifeng

我觉得多花时间发掘你的优势和独特的地方吧，GT不理想有时候越描越黑的

iBeatTrick

Never mention it.

gaotao

以下是引用iBeatTrick在2007-4-21 19:33:00的发言：
Never mention it.

我看很多人经验或者例子里面,不都把那些自己的不足的原因写出来么,是不是我用什么工作太忙啊,什么这个事情,那个事情的,没有太特殊的例子或者不可抗拒力来做原因，说了等于没有说,大家都忙,大家都烦,为什么我就考的不好,是不是这个道理?

难道就找其他的有说服力的理由自己GT差了,或者干脆IGNORE掉 ?

pumpkin

个人建议IGNORE，不要想着解释这个。

Huangzizeng

你还不如多写点自己的优点呢.