【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day7

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Day7
1.（187）United States Senator Daniel Inouye was appointed to several posts within the Democratic Party during his first term, that included assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee. C
A.that included（that 前面不加逗号）
B.which includes （which 会修饰term了）
C.including
D.some of which were（这里并没有表示部分的语义在里面）
E.among them being（being 用的不好）

2.（188）Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are now drawing solid conclusions about how the human brain grows and how babies acquire language. A
A.Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are
B.Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are （不该有and的）
C.Neuroscientists amassing a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are（and 出现的莫名其妙）
D.Neuroscientists have amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, （同E）   
E.Neuroscientists have amassed, over the past twenty years, a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood,（后面的应该才是主句，中间的应该其修饰作用）

3.（189）She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States. C
A.She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to （后面得有连词，不然两个主语）
B.Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to（应该是先德国后美国）
C.Less successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in
D.Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to（变成人和国家比了，而且less后面要有than）
E.She had been less successful after emigrating to New York than in（这个也是缺少连词）