TWE 015..掐了时间写的，和不算时间的简直是两回事啊。。请大家扔砖

Caroline1118

写了半小时，然后帖到word里改了。很多地方句不达意，请大家指出表达的不够地道的地方，谨听教诲，多多益善。

015 Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

There is an old Chinese saying: Having a good neighbor is more important than having relatives living far away. It is certainly true. A good neighbor will have good influence on your daily life and will give you a hand when you are in trouble. The question we are concerned with now is that what the qualities of good neighbors are. In my opinion, good neighbors are people who are thoughtful helpful and respectful.

To begin with, a good neighbor is thoughtful. He will never interfere his neighbors by unscrupulously playing loud music, or singing Kala Okay at midnight. In the contrary, a good neighbor thinks for people who live around him. I always appreciate my roommate, for she asks for my approval every time before starting using the vacuum machine.

Moreover, I believe a good neighbor should always offer his help when necessary. Take a simple example, when you don't have enough chairs at home when holding a party, a good neighbor will give a hand by lending his to you. Or it happens to you to forget to buy the candle when lack of electricity, your nice neighbor do you a favor again when you are in dark. All these can happen everyday in our life. A good neighbor always appears when you need them.

Last but not least, an ideal neighbor will be a person who knows how to respect his neighbor. Everybody has his own privacy, and no one wants his privacy to be spread out by a gossipmonger. A good neighbor knows it is rather rude and irresponsible to talk about others' personal affairs and will thus keep a proper distance with people living around.

We have seen that good neighbors should have the qualities of thoughtfulness, helpfulness and respectfulness. What I would like to put up with is that, while setting criteria for our neighbors, we should not forget to behave like what we require others. A healthy neighborhood asks for efforts from both our neighbors and ourselves.

有几个问题：

1。最后一各单词应该写ourselves还是us？ ourselves好像语法不对，us又不是我想表达的意思了。

2。卡拉ok怎么说？

3。停电怎么表达比较好？

Caroline1118

已经知道一个词用错了put up with 应该改成put forward。。实在是晕

pengstone

第一遍写得不好没关系，多改才能更快进步。但一定要尽快开始掐时间写。