我的第一篇 TWE129

ball2003

129 A university plan to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture. Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reseasons in your recommendation

Recently I hear the news that a university plans to develop a new research center in my country. And the university gives my country a choice to decide which kind of center will be built. On the one hand, some people prefer a center for business research, who say that a business research center can bring more advanced business thoughts to our country, which will fluent the economy of our country. On the other hand, others believe that a center of agriculture research will be more important to our country because our country is a farm country and most people of our country are farmers. After thoughtful consideration, I will vote for building a farming research center in my country.

To begin with, China has made an impressive improvement in development of economy and business during last few years. More foreign government and private companies are attracted by the economic development of my country, making them do a lot of research by self-interesting and self-benefits. Chinese business companies and government will get these works freely. Meanwhile, many Chinese universities have economy research centers. They will research different aspects of development of Chinese business and display their research result and papers on worldwide magazines, which will lead to more discussion about Chinese economy development in the worldwide. I think that is enough to the development of my country's business development.

Next, everybody knows China is a farming country. My country has 15 billion people, 80% of who are farmers, and the land for farming in my country is highly limited. For these reasons, that more production can be produced on limited land is always a key issue for China. However, because of scarce finical aid, few agriculture research centers are built. Under this condition, I am so glad to hear the news that a university plans to build a research in my country. We should catch the chance to build a farming center to help farming industrial development of my country.

To sum up, because there are already so many good business research centers for business and there are so few farming centers for argituial centers, which are more important to my country, I will strongly support to build a farming center in my country.

这是我的第一篇，上来就是限时写的。

自己感到的缺点有，

结构方面，容还未能展开，应该增添一段；没段都感觉展开的不够但又不知如何展开

语言方面，用次太简单了，缺乏积导致累和变化，句式也有很多不足。

还有很多，不过，总算开始动笔写了。

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