shatong424的作业贴

shatong424

9月14日   占座   独立 综合

shatong424

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: people are now easier to become educated than in the past.

As the time passed, a huge percentage of population in the world, nowadays seem to be educated. Even if a fraction of people also remain at home at the point when they should be at the school, many people fulfill their educational acquisition; thus, it is fairly true that people, as it were, are now easier to get access to education.

The prosperous economical condition brings about whatever the huge range of people desire for their educational need. Above all, the material of people's need, specifically speaking, the up-to-date books presenting the latest knowledge, the professional and experienced teachers, the active and scientific teaching technique, has been reaching to everyone at no more than the middle-class society. The upper-class and middle-class society are predominant in the present period of the time, and as many knows. The economical resources are concentrate on these two classes, and even the low-class families, some of them suffering from the problem of the educational fee, can more or less be funded by the government, other members of the society and even, at the same time, some individuals with the high-level standard of life. In the past, however, with the high cost of the paper material, the books could only be viewed by landlords; because of the low salary, only a fraction of teachers were engaged in the teaching; owing to the economical policy of the government at that point, the teaching technique stood at the ignorance of the people's mind. The consequent effects would have been the people's lack of the education, which are completely different from the picture of education today.

The huge change involved in the attitude of the education steers the people toward the way in which people are easier to be taught. To start with, the parent's attitude shifts dramatically. The investigation on the internet shows us the sign that the people's investment is predetermined to serve for the children's future happiness, the big portion of which is the education. Let us get down to the present tendency. First, more and more customs in the bank, fill in the application form of the educational loan, because these money would lay the solid foundation for their children long-term education. Secondly, not only do parents pay more and more attention to the rank of the school, but are becoming more sensitive to every chance which can perfectly finalize their children's schooling. In contrast, dating back to the last century, just four or five decades before now, people in most part, with the traditional thought, never be aware of the importance of their children's education. In retrospect, the children were brought up via imparting the farming technique on their children, and promoted to be good farming assistance rather than an excellent intellectual. There is no doubt that their parents at that point, more or less, hindered their children development on the education. What if their parents discarded such an old viewpoint, could their children be educated easily, could not they?

The extraordinary technology innovations provide children with many methods to acquire the education. During the ninetieth century, children studied in their family, having little chance touch the paper books, and there were no library for them to search for, partly because the knowledge is kind of luxury-——only being shared in the politicians’ or in those who were regarded as the representation of elites. Hardly could normal people achieve, however desirable, what people nowadays create, mostly for the objective condition, the technology, constraint their children vision of the world, unless they could travel afar to gain the knowledge as some few people did. Unlike the lack of state-of-the-art technology in the past, the television and media have delivered the information from every corner of the world to the people sitting in front of the screen; The computer with access to the Internet--the most fashionable and common element of the technology-- are brought in families step by step; and needless to say, with the printing having been the low-level technique, the library can be seen everywhere; even, the auditoria and visual classes can be carried out on the internet, downloaded to the portable device like the Mp4 or the mobile phone, viewed everywhere--in the bus, the public shopping mall, the restaurant and etc. If only you want to learn something, everything with the respect of the every field would be available.

"It is the time of the information." people said. So, I believe that the storm of such information explosion sweep away illiterates, sending the knowledge to us. The education is something like the staple of the meal, enjoyed in everyday life.

shatong424

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Professors in the universities or colleges should focus on academic research rather than educating students. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As it is said, the professors going about the scientific research promote the statue of the university and contribute to the development of the present technological level. Even so, I could merely say that as an essential role, the professors should spend more time educating their students than focusing on the research.

Above all, the performance of students heavily hinges upon the professors’ attitude toward them. Regarding the interests of the university, the efforts devoted to the students are mostly transformed into the excellence of the students in the future. Generally, with obligation to the students, the student-centered schools like Harvard always attract and cultivate more well-rounded students than the teacher-centered schools do. Harvard's professors make an excessive effort to conduct their students on making progress in all-around aspects." It is teaching students that is the focus. ", said Drew Gilpin Faust, the last president of Harvard. Just like the saying “you reap what you sow.”, facing the peer pressure, students graduated from Harvard are becoming role models, actively exerting considerable influence on various realms.

Furthermore, teaching students is virtually a main driving force behind the technology innovation. Indisputably, the professors play a pivotal role in the science and technology improvement, and at the same time, the professors who can turn out a flash of an innovative idea are often assisted by the student. For instance, the professor of Harvard called Robert P. Kirshner, who is doing research about the astrophysics, was invited to make speech or to give a lecture in many famous universities like MIT and Yale. After integrating the teaching methodology and the academic research many years, his spending on teaching prompts him to rebuild and revise his own ideas so that he has been excellent in the astrophysics field. By the same token, it's little wonder that a professor reaching such a high level can't be free from the student's assistance.

Granted, professors’ doing research is part and parcel of the technology innovation. The automated machines are operated based on the scientific fundamentals which professors have defined; the breakthrough on the program of space probe are pushed forward by the professors’ astonishing discoveries; the progress of the DNA program have been accelerated after their a large number of the experiments. No matter how essential the doing research is, however, professors have to make a huge effort to promote the development of students. Note that everything revolving around the technology innovation is actually a branch of knowledge, and knowledge, as many think, must be carried from one generation to the next. The stream of the technology would be drained away, if the emphasis were not placed on the students.

To sum up, it is educating students that can provide the impetus behind the revolutionized technology and the advancement of students, and that have to be concentrated as well.

超级无敌小鹤鹤

欢迎加入小分队~~~ 加油~

shatong424

嗯、我是新来的，还不熟悉大家，以后多多关照啊， 一起杀T

shatong424

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the grades can encourage the students to study


Indeed, students love the childhood so far with their buddies as company; thus, the orgies of hatred towards the schooling are capable of directing them go astray. Fortunately, the grades like kind of rule can constraint students’ fury of learning, and maybe turn these students into the enthusiasts in study.

The pupils in the primary schools are awarded to perform well by acquiring good marks in their ordinary test. The butterfly effect of the grades has been shown obviously. In particular, students notice the subtle depression on their parents’ faces while their peers are praised, and then back to the house, they are impressively aware of the role models established by parents and asked to imitate these peers’ behavior. In fact, not only for their parents request, but also for their own psychological nature, they appear to be jealous of others’ glory and are injected with the violent ambition; thus, they hardly give up the chance to seek for the relatively better score—the indication of their good performance and the sign of their medal. Without any doubt, the high score is the fruit of the studious people and only can be created via continuous study.

More importantly, as for the middle school students, the high score is the gateway to the ideal education. In view of this point, it is better to discuss about the students in China. With the fierce competition, whether they can continue their education in the relatively ideal schools is the main factor of their seeking the high scores, and high score, as many people learn, can knock down the gate of the advanced school. The final test in the last year of students, for example, is significant for their higher education, and they do their utmost to gain the perfect score regardless of staying up late every midnight, harming their own vision and bearing the loneliness for preparing tests. It is worthy of noting that all of these astonishing efforts to study are the students’ initiatives but the imposition on them. Therefore, it is proved that the grades are truly an impetus behind students’ learning.

Last but not least, the scores weigh heavily against the future profession or job of students. In terms of the graduates’ interview, the company recruitment firstly concentrates on the educational experience, frankly speaking, the degrees acquired in one’s university or in a particular field. The GPA of a student, the official criterion of one’s ability, belongs to the one of the above points, and at the meanwhile, mostly hinges on the course attendance, the average grades of every test, the achievement of their academic research and so forth. All of these items are turned out through the hard work. Only if students get down to study hard enough would they be picked up among their peers; hence it is fair to say that scores can stimulate their learning enthusiasm.

The elites are always molded by the grades, which I take leave to recognize as driving force behind their learning.

xiumu2280

9.17独立
Indeed, students love the childhood so far with their buddies as company/in good company(兴趣相投）; thus, the orgies of hatred towards the schooling are capable of directing them go astray. Fortunately, the grades like kind/kinds of rule can constraint(名词）/restrict students’ fury of learning, and maybe turn these students into the（删掉） enthusiasts in study.

The pupils in the primary schools are awarded to（to后面接获得奖励的人也就是pupils,短语意思是XX被给予什么，是想说好成绩给了那些表现好的孩子？) perform well by acquiring good marks in their ordinary test. The butterfly effect of the grades has been shown obviously. In particular, students notice the subtle depression on their parents’ faces while their/other peers are praised, and then back to the house, they are impressively aware of the role models established by parents and asked to imitate these peers’ behavior. In fact, not only for their parents/parents' request, but also for their own psychological nature, they appear to be jealous of others’ glory and are injected with the violent/intense一般不这么搭配 ambition; thus, they hardly give up the chance to seek for the relatively better score—the indication of their good performance and the sign of their medal. Without any doubt, the high score is the fruit of the studious people and only can be created via continuous study.

More importantly, as for the middle school students, the high score is the gateway to the ideal education. In view of this point, it is better to discuss about the students in China. With the fierce competition, whether they can continue their education in the relatively ideal schools is the main factor of their seeking （for)the high scores, and high score, as many people learn/learned, can knock down/ON the gate of the advanced school. The final test in the last year of students/middle school, for example, is significant for their higher education, and they do their utmost to gain the perfect score regardless of staying up late every midnight, harming their own vision and bearing the loneliness for preparing tests. It is worthy of noting that all of these astonishing efforts to study are the students’ initiatives but/instead of the imposition on them. Therefore, it is proved that the grades are truly an impetus behind students’ learning.

Last but not least, the scores weigh heavily against the future profession or job of students. In terms of the graduates’ interview, the company/company's recruitment firstly concentrates on the educational experience, frankly speaking一般用在发表观点前面/in other words, the degrees acquired in one’s university or in a particular field. The GPA of a student, the official criterion of one’s ability, belongs to the one of the above points（这句没有理解啊```!), and at the meanwhile, mostly hinges on the course attendance, the average grades of every test, the achievement of their academic research and so forth. All of these items are turned out through the hard work. Only if students get down to study hard enough would they be picked up among their peers; hence it is fair to say that scores can stimulate their learning enthusiasm.

The elites are always molded by the grades, which I take leave to recognize as driving force behind their learning.

单词，短语什么真的很丰富···好多我都不认识
字数好多，打字速度要求高
中间论述段的首句最好是主题句
结尾太短，应该对上面有个概括总结，更有逻辑

shatong424

Some people prefer to spend their money on travelling or vacation, while others prefer to spend their money for the future. Which one do you prefer and why?


The arrangement of spending money weighs heavily against our life standard. In light of life standard, I tend to profess that transforming my cash into my account in bank and saving it for future are more rational at my disposal.


Above all, so much uncertainty of my future financial capacity restricts my thought to saving my money. In this case, it is necessary to conceive what I would spend in the future. Materially speaking, housing and food are two important items in my daily life. Considering that the house price has been soaring day by day and the food price has been inflated, which is a severe issue haunting citizens, many people sacrifice their whole life to earn a house. Even so, more horribly, many of them also hold nothing in their hand up to the end of their life. As many people have been suffering from such a circumstance, can I ensure that I will be content with my basic demand in my future? When the question of where I will live and what I will eat in the future arises, the good strategy would be to save my money prior to the time when your income is no more than your expenditure.


With another aspect important to my life, the financial budget on the educational investment hinges on the decision of saving money. In other words, the consumption of the offspring’s education is deeply dependent upon the amount I have saved before. In China, where I live, for instance, as long as you intend to raise a child, the educational investment inevitably occupy a great amount of your income. In fact, in accordance with the lowest standard of education investment, a couple needs nearly more than one hundred thousand RMB to respond to a child’s request for education; however, the annual average per capita income statistically show that 80 percent of population have not been equipped with such a corresponding financial capacity yet. Only if I stock the cash previously would I take advantage of these amounts to fulfill my child’s need. Therefore, the realization of such reality steer me towards the way of saving money.


Admittedly, spending money in travelling, in a sense, is also a reason proposal. With respect of the heavy loads on work and the trivialities of daily life, what people can do to relieve such outward pressure is to seek for the temporary relaxation, as those who has despised city life travel far away to the wild forest but back to their homes soon, just for noticing the lack of food and of suitable room to live in. As if sleeping pills can pacify your mind but cannot truly help you sleep in regular time, travelling is merely able to seemingly obscure the facts that your tough life always follows you. Once the ideal world disappears and you have to face your real life again, the benefits of travelling would be undermined.


To sum up, regarding the above points, I prefer saving money for future than spending it in travelling or vacation.

shatong424

9 20 综合

Recently, the fossils found by the scientists, as the reading claims, cooperate some materials which could be testified as the remains of the T. rex’s living tissues—blood vessels, red blood cells and collagen matrix. However, the professor profess that the evidence provided by the reading cannot supports this idea.; therefore, he extract his viewpoints from some evidences to oppose what the reading suggests.



First, regarding the soft and flexible substances found the channels, the empty area in the T rex’s bone, professor thinks that these soft materials might originate from other sources, for the bacteria existing in the hollows in the bone secreted a trace of organic materials after they left the bone,. Thereby, the soft materials found in the fossils cannot be justified as the remains of the blood vessels.



Moreover, considering the point that spheres presenting inside the bone could be the remains of the red blood cells, the professors believe that these spheres containing the iron could merely be some reddish mineral instead of the remains of the red blood cells, because these fossils can also be found in the same place amoung other animals. For example, many primitive animals also have these spheres, but they have not the red blood cells, which illustrates that the spheres’ origin were not the red blood cells.



In the end, professor casts doubt to the third point posed by the reading that collagen detected in the bone’s fossils would be the remains of the living bone tissue. In fact, in accordance with the professor's  confirmation, the collagen which are regarded as a part of the T rex living in the 70 million years ago can never be preserved more than 100 thousand years or so, which strongly contradicts what the reading suggests. On the other hand, the collagen can be produced by the human’s skin, which may provides the clue that the collagen inside the fossils could come from the researcher’s skin when they handle the fossil samples

shatong424

which do you choose to improve your health：kind of food you eat，amount of exercise，amount of stress



After the long-term research, the healthy body proved to be the result of a variety of food; thus, the kind of the food must be considered when I face the issue of my health.

The variety of the food in the diet can lead to the good health. People can learn of this viewpoint from the concrete example. People living in China averagely have a relatively long lifespan. In contrast, the people inhabiting America keep a relatively shorter one. In substance, the only difference of these two groups of people is related to the composition of their daily diet. In accordance with the research, with excessive deep-fried food, people feeding on the fried food like the fried chicken and French fries are subject possibly to the obesity and the coronary heart disease. What assists people in leading a healthy life is the sensible diet consisting of vegetable and some grains with a limited amount of oil, which is the source of Chinese food. We can sense that people coming to Chinese are desperate for the utter changes in their diet for the sake of their health. As people in authority claim, seeking for our health virtually need combine our force to improve our diet

The food can supply us some essential elements building our body. Technically speaking, the chemical compounds within our cells need proteins, vitamins and minerals extracted from the daily food supply. First, the proteins, which are regarded as the builder of the humans, are abundant in eggs, meats and all of the diary products. On the other hand, the proteins from the food play the pivotal part in the immune reaction to the deadly diseases, the flu and some common virus. Not only for the body’s immune system, but also for the body’s normal operation, the food should be greatly improve. The metabolic system control the normal body’s activity, and as scientists study, the vegetable and fruits supplement the basic chemical elements with a large amount of vitamins and minerals, the necessities for building a healthy body. Apart from the above points, the carbohydrate absorbed from the rice, maize and wheat can also provide the energy for the body’s activity and chemical reaction inside the cells. Based on these points, there is no doubt that the improvement of food is the wise strategy of obtaining a good health.

Admittedly, exercise is also important for people’s health. The exercise—the source of heath—can speed up our metabolic rate, sculpt the shape of our body, and lengthen our lifespan, but at the meanwhile, we should be aware of the significance of the food. The exercise cannot substitute for the food. Merely can food offer you some energy when you feel exhausted, and otherwise you will end up with losing your strength to do anything as much as possible.

Lastly, no matter how important the exercise and the amour of the stress are, never is the food arrangement supposed to be ignored. In light of the several fundamental matters obtained from food, I am engaged in keeping health by virtue of the food improvement.