OG 13 104题 彻底混乱了 麻烦大神出手相救在此谢过

sunyuwei

104. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on
her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinating them with her narratives,

(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating
them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully
coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter

(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix
Potter, in her book illustrations

(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully
coordinated them with her narratives and

关于A 选项，会产生coordinating 修饰illustrastrasions 的歧义，但是我认为 in her book illustrations作为插入语根本可以删去不看，怎么会有歧义？同样B选项In her book illustrations是个状语，但是这貌似是什么夹心修饰。。不太清楚。E选项中OG说The participial phrase does not clearly modify book illustrations;这里的coordinated 是动词吧？就算有问题也是讲coordinate作为动词与captalize 并列改变原意，所以OG 的解释不清楚了

狗狗AGO

elusive 发表于 2016-2-20 04:22
这个题我做的时候也是不明白，后来才想明白了。这个题考的试修饰，关键在于删除插入语和防止夹心修饰。先从 ...

Mark一下！               

Charleneee

苏遇也 发表于 2017-9-9 02:07
这题的做题思路我还是晕乎乎的。
试着分析一下。v-ing做修饰，有两种情况，一种是表伴随，一种是表结果。 ...

同意！               

Charline_chang

CoralUT 发表于 2019-9-6 10:45
https://forum.chasedream.com/thread-808387-1-1.html
这个贴二楼的解释堪称绝妙，我觉得完美解释了A的错 ...

谢谢 这个贴很赞！

CoralUT

https://forum.chasedream.com/thread-808387-1-1.html
这个贴二楼的解释堪称绝妙，我觉得完美解释了A的错误

小陈冲鸭

elusive 发表于 2016-2-20 04:22
这个题我做的时候也是不明白，后来才想明白了。这个题考的试修饰，关键在于删除插入语和防止夹心修饰。先从 ...

A怎么少了谓语呢？capitalized 不是谓语吗

顿东w

旺财财 发表于 2014-9-20 22:56
这也是个老早争议的题目了
B选项--夹心修饰在语法上是有问题的。不明确ambiguity而且逻辑混乱。
如果修饰前 ...

在曼哈顿上看到过Ron写的一个句子 这是您所说的“两个同时修饰同一个句子的adv. modifiers就那么用逗号串联“
Coming home from school, riding my bike, I was knocked down by the wind.
here, "coming home from school" and "riding my bike" are both genuinely initial modifiers, attempting to describe "I".

source： https://www.manhattanprep.com/gmat/forums/another-prep-sc-t5704-15.html

buliddream

在想A选项的谓语问题。个人觉得A选项谓语没有问题
在A选项中，in her book illustration, 视为插入语，carefully 后面balabala视为非限制性定语修饰BP这个人，然后句子的主干是 BP capitalized on ....... 也就是谓语是capitalize
不知道这个理解有没有毛病

自救750

elusive 发表于 2016-2-20 04:22
这个题我做的时候也是不明白，后来才想明白了。这个题考的试修饰，关键在于删除插入语和防止夹心修饰。先从 ...

同意！               

RichardVeritas

AngevinUpUpUp 发表于 2017-10-17 21:01
同意！

104. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
A 错误，coordinating 是主动形式，不能修饰illustrations。如果修饰capitalized，有不合适，capitalized是已经完成的事，用coordinating 修饰有问题，所以有OG解释use of the present progressive form of the verb confuses the sequence of time with respect to the past tense of the main verb capitalized.  

C 则正确，简洁无重复清楚表达