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发表于 2014-9-1 21:30:59 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |正序浏览 |阅读模式
刚刚杀完G 感觉托福水平大不如前(还是感觉G作文简单呜呜TAT) 希望小伙伴们不要嫌弃 我一定好好写 认真给大家改作文!!!
927有T考试 明天秋季入学~ 申请会计硕士~ 一起加油↖(^ω^)↗


9-1
You can know a lot about aperson through the types of friends this person has
Friends are a mighty elixir,and they play a vital role in people’s success and happiness. Currently, thereis a debate over whether people can learn other individuals via the varietiesof friends those individuals get acquainted with. Some people assert thatpeople often get together merely for corporation rather than soulcommunications. In contrast, I prefer the view that people are dived into groupsby their common preferences and people could certainly know a lot about aperson from the friends around.
Firstof all, the simple reason why people become friends is that they share commoninterests, which bring abundant common topic to discuss. For example, I am keen on jazz dance, whichneeds huge enthusiasm and sexy shows. Emily, my best friend, often dance withme in our extracurricular time for several hours. We often learn the hottestand the most popular dance, like Tik Tok , together and we are both outgoinggirls. It is hard to imagine I spend lots of time with a quite person and I wouldfeel uncomfortable and embarrassed as well. It is obvious that I intend tospend my treasure time doing my favorite things and I like to share thehappiest mood with the people who have the same feeling.
Secondly,it is a common phenomenon that people can become good friends when sharing sameview of life. Apparently, a personwith ambitious aims will not satisfy with the one who hold the belief thatleading an ordinary life is enough. Furthermore, a hardworking student arereluctant to study with a lazy one. For example, I am a diligent student and Ioften study with the top students in my class. There are several students whoare merely immersed in computer games every day. I can teach them beforeexamination because they ask for help and because we are in the same class, butI would not make deeper friends with them since we have totally life habits andI think what they do is completely wasting time.
Admittedly, it may be true that sometimes people arearranged to complete the same task with other individuals, and during theprocess, people cooperate very well with each other and set up a friendship.After all, they are aiming at the same goal. When finishing the task, theywould not contact with each other anymore. However, I don’t think this type offriends are true friends, and this is common working relationship. Furthermore,I am concerned that merely true friends can represent one person’s personality,life style, and so on.
In a nutshell, I could safely draw the conclusion thatpeoplecould certainly know a lot about a person from the friends around the people.

TPO11
The lecture and the reading passage holdcompletely different views towards the decline of reading literature-novels,plays, and poems. The reading claims that it is detrimental for the readingpublic, for culture in general, and for the future of literature itself.However, the listening holds an opposite view.

First the reading claims that onlyliterature provides the intellectual stimulation but people spend less timereading it now. However, the professor thinks reading literature books is notthe only way to stimulate the intellect. Science writing, history, politicalanalysis, etc. aren’t literature but they are of high quality. Also, they canstimulate imagination as well.

Second, the reading argues that divertingtime previously spent in reading literature to trivial forms of entertainmenthas lowered the level of culture in general. However, the professor claims thatsome kinds of valuable culture, like music and movies, are not written andpeople are not wasting time to listen to a great song or see a great movie. Nowthe culture has changed and there are more forms of culture besides novel andpoems. In addition, some of these forms speak more directly to contemporaryconcerns than literature does.

Finally, the reading passage states thatthere are many talented writers today, but they lack an audience. While thelecture states that it is not readers fault, actually it is the authors fault.Some modern articles is intended to be difficult to understand. Here is notmuch reason to suppose that earlier generations of readers would have read alot of today’s literature either.



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 楼主| 发表于 2014-10-12 18:52:15 | 只看该作者
mygirlzini 发表于 2014-10-12 15:36
Sorry,传晚了~~~请多包涵~~有不对的地方,还望指教

没事啦 么么哒
126#
发表于 2014-10-12 15:36:57 | 只看该作者
loverony713 发表于 2014-10-10 23:13
10-8
some people say that students should study many lessons during a semester,but others say that i ...

Sorry,传晚了~~~请多包涵~~有不对的地方,还望指教

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 楼主| 发表于 2014-10-11 15:30:35 | 只看该作者
echosun2002 发表于 2014-10-11 10:16
标黄都是超赞的,红色是我觉得有点问题的,总的来说是值得收藏的好文

谢谢美女!!!!~~~~
10-9作文
124#
发表于 2014-10-11 10:16:44 | 只看该作者
标黄都是超赞的,红色是我觉得有点问题的,总的来说是值得收藏的好文

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 楼主| 发表于 2014-10-10 23:14:26 | 只看该作者
橙圆 发表于 2014-10-9 20:58
Sorry传晚了
今天一天都在外面
写得很棒~

么么哒
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 楼主| 发表于 2014-10-10 23:13:25 | 只看该作者
10-8
some people say that students should study many lessons during a semester,but others say that it is better for students to just take three or four lessons. which do you think is better

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发表于 2014-10-9 20:58:45 | 只看该作者
Sorry传晚了
今天一天都在外面
写得很棒~

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 楼主| 发表于 2014-10-8 22:02:15 | 只看该作者
10-7
your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does

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 楼主| 发表于 2014-10-6 19:40:56 | 只看该作者
10-5
People who have developed many different kinds of skills are more successful than people who focus on ony one skill
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