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9-1

You can know a lot about aperson through the types of friends this person has

Friends are a mighty elixir,and they play a vital role in people’s success and happiness. Currently, thereis a debate over whether people can learn other individuals via the varietiesof friends those individuals get acquainted with. Some people assert thatpeople often get together merely for corporation rather than soulcommunications. In contrast, I prefer the view that people are dived into groupsby their common preferences and people could certainly know a lot about aperson from the friends around.

Firstof all, the simple reason why people become friends is that they share commoninterests, which bring abundant common topic to discuss. For example, I am keen on jazz dance, whichneeds huge enthusiasm and sexy shows. Emily, my best friend, often dance withme in our extracurricular time for several hours. We often learn the hottestand the most popular dance, like Tik Tok , together and we are both outgoinggirls. It is hard to imagine I spend lots of time with a quite person and I wouldfeel uncomfortable and embarrassed as well. It is obvious that I intend tospend my treasure time doing my favorite things and I like to share thehappiest mood with the people who have the same feeling.

Secondly,it is a common phenomenon that people can become good friends when sharing sameview of life. Apparently, a personwith ambitious aims will not satisfy with the one who hold the belief thatleading an ordinary life is enough. Furthermore, a hardworking student arereluctant to study with a lazy one. For example, I am a diligent student and Ioften study with the top students in my class. There are several students whoare merely immersed in computer games every day. I can teach them beforeexamination because they ask for help and because we are in the same class, butI would not make deeper friends with them since we have totally life habits andI think what they do is completely wasting time.

Admittedly, it may be true that sometimes people arearranged to complete the same task with other individuals, and during theprocess, people cooperate very well with each other and set up a friendship.After all, they are aiming at the same goal. When finishing the task, theywould not contact with each other anymore. However, I don’t think this type offriends are true friends, and this is common working relationship. Furthermore,I am concerned that merely true friends can represent one person’s personality,life style, and so on.

In a nutshell, I could safely draw the conclusion thatpeoplecould certainly know a lot about a person from the friends around the people.

TPO11

The lecture and the reading passage holdcompletely different views towards the decline of reading literature-novels,plays, and poems. The reading claims that it is detrimental for the readingpublic, for culture in general, and for the future of literature itself.However, the listening holds an opposite view.

First the reading claims that onlyliterature provides the intellectual stimulation but people spend less timereading it now. However, the professor thinks reading literature books is notthe only way to stimulate the intellect. Science writing, history, politicalanalysis, etc. aren’t literature but they are of high quality. Also, they canstimulate imagination as well.

Second, the reading argues that divertingtime previously spent in reading literature to trivial forms of entertainmenthas lowered the level of culture in general. However, the professor claims thatsome kinds of valuable culture, like music and movies, are not written andpeople are not wasting time to listen to a great song or see a great movie. Nowthe culture has changed and there are more forms of culture besides novel andpoems. In addition, some of these forms speak more directly to contemporaryconcerns than literature does.

Finally, the reading passage states thatthere are many talented writers today, but they lack an audience. While thelecture states that it is not readers fault, actually it is the authors fault.Some modern articles is intended to be difficult to understand. Here is notmuch reason to suppose that earlier generations of readers would have read alot of today’s literature either.

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mygirlzini 发表于 2014-10-12 15:36
Sorry,传晚了～～～请多包涵～～有不对的地方，还望指教

没事啦 么么哒

mygirlzini

loverony713 发表于 2014-10-10 23:13
10-8
some people say that students should study many lessons during a semester,but others say that i ...

Sorry,传晚了～～～请多包涵～～有不对的地方，还望指教

loverony713

echosun2002 发表于 2014-10-11 10:16
标黄都是超赞的，红色是我觉得有点问题的，总的来说是值得收藏的好文

谢谢美女！！！！~~~~
10-9作文

echosun2002

标黄都是超赞的，红色是我觉得有点问题的，总的来说是值得收藏的好文

loverony713

橙圆 发表于 2014-10-9 20:58
Sorry传晚了
今天一天都在外面
写得很棒~

么么哒

loverony713

10-8
some people say that students should study many lessons during a semester,but others say that it is better for students to just take three or four lessons. which do you think is better

橙圆

Sorry传晚了
今天一天都在外面
写得很棒~

loverony713

10-7
your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does

loverony713

10-5
People who have developed many different kinds of skills are more successful than people who focus on ony one skill.

loverony713

10-4
Students should take at least one year off to work or travel after high school before they go to study at a university.
有的地方有点空 所以求批评 哈哈~~~

Studying at universities, a new chapter of life, is the dream of all high school students. Should they do something else, such as a year off working or travelling, prior to their entering universities? From my perspective, it is of great necessity for students to take a gap year before experiencing the life in universities.

Initially, students can better understand themselves and locate their interests during the gap year. High school students follow their intense high school schedules so much that they not only need to excel at their academic work, but are also required to fulfill other talent training courses such as piano or dancing classes. They simply just do what they are told and have little chance to specify something they really like. By taking a long time out or traveling, they can know themselves better and this facilitates their future career.  By working in diverse circumstances, students can have practical feeling of dealing with various jobs, and they can find the most appropriate one, which could add color to the dull routine of everyday life. Last summer I have been recruited as a salesperson of P&G, but I found that job really required people who were outgoing and extroverted; consequently, as an introverted and a shy girl, I would not choose that kinds of job as my future career. In addition, by travelling abroad, students can better locate what they really like and what they can really do for the future. If they are given an opportunity to engage in some meditation and social practices, they are likely to discover the true callings.  

Secondly, taking a gap year provides students a great chance of refreshing the mind and recharging the battery before entering universities. The education in high schools is intense and more exam-oriented. Immersing themselves in the sea of various subjects, high school students are always exhausted and cram themselves with all fundamental courses, such as math, chemistry, and history. In other words, hardly can they have a break in the daily life. Thus, if students can take a year off doing something different, they can really have a rest and enjoy the beauty of life. For instance, after graduating from high school, I worked in Star barks, learning how to make delicious cookies and tasty coffee, which were my dreams in childhood. This job not only offered me an opportunity to refresh my mind, but also provided me with a close contact with different people, cultures, and skills. After that short experience, which made me threw away all the burden completely, I totally relaxed myself and got a delightful mood to have a new life in college.

Admittedly, taking a year to work or travel may be detrimental. For instance, some high school students, being such a young age, may focus much on things that are fun and interesting. They might end up learning nothing. However, if parents can help children make a schedule, students could also obtain the benefits ultimately. Time can be arranged more properly and efficiently.

In conclusion, taking a gap year is beneficial for high school students, and the life will be more meaningful and colorful.