独立作文求狠批

evolanna

Nowadays ,some people complains that young people depend on their parents too much that they could not make decisions without their parents .But I am the one ,and maybe always be ,those people who hold the opinion that young people are better to make decisions on their own that young people in the past.
Admittedly ,it was common ,in ancient china ,parents made decision for their children .Even ,the whole lives of children might determined by their parents who decided what vocation children should be engaged in ,who children should marry on .It is a proverb that reflect this phenomenon , “parents and matchmakers decided the children’s wives/husbands” .since only under the circumstance that people were constricted by the awareness of confucianism which have great impact on Chinese and society leaded by emperors .Emperors spread the thoughts that children are possession of parents so that children’s life must determined by their parents ,which cause that young people could not make better decision .
In contemporary society, dependent as some young people are , there are large number of young people make better choice on their own. With development of society and spreading of different kinds of culture ,parents realized that determining for their children would cause physically and mentally damage to their children .People who cannot make appropriate decision are at odds with contemporary society which need far-seeing people .In another words ,people’s life hinge on the decisions they make .So Instead of making decision for their children ,an increasing number of parents choose to provide some suggestion to their children in order to develop the children’s ability on how to determine matters .Hence young people can make better decisions than before .They determine their life well .They are responsible for their lives .And they never regret decisions they made. My experience is case in point .When I was seven years old ,my mother began to develop the ability of making decisions .I decided to study music and she taught me how to choose instruments .With the help of my mother , I determined to play the violin which gave me competitive edge .After ten years learning ,I passed the exam of ability of art which help me entered one of the famous university in China. Similarly,this point also can be illustrated by my cousin’s experience .When he was young , he wanted to experience the variety kinds of life and expanded his outlook ,so he decided to go abroad .It was his parents that support him and provide the chance of best education of English in our city .After several years of Endeavour his dream came true and now he is a PHD of psychology which fields he enjoyed in the US .
In conclusion ,it is young people nowadays that can make better decisions than young people in the past.

evolanna

12.6号独立+综合，谢谢小伙伴啦

evolanna

11.29独立

evolanna

麻烦小伙伴了~~~么么哒

evolanna

11.20~~谢谢小伙伴

evolanna

17号的作文。。。也很烂。。谢谢小伙伴了~

evolanna

15号的作文。。。写的好烂。。第一次跑题了。。。然后写了第二遍。。。

carmensh

evolanna 发表于 2013-11-16 13:48
小伙伴改的好认真呢。。。谢谢啦。。。建议真的都很不错呢。。。有一点儿疑问，就是个人喜欢把让步段放在 ...

可能这两种都可以吧，不过我看见的貌似放在后面的多一些~~不过能自圆其说就好啦~

evolanna

carmensh 发表于 2013-11-16 08:52
不好意思这两天事情比较多改晚了~小伙伴见谅哈！！

小伙伴改的好认真呢。。。谢谢啦。。。建议真的都很不错呢。。。有一点儿疑问，就是个人喜欢把让步段放在前面，这样，后面的文字就能用来驳斥前面的让步段。。。但是又有书上说应该放在后面，所以好纠结的说。。

carmensh

evolanna 发表于 2013-11-14 22:54
这是11.14号的。。。谢谢小伙伴修改啦

不好意思这两天事情比较多改晚了~小伙伴见谅哈！！