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                                                               Life today is easier and more comfortable than the life of previous generation .
People’s life have raised continuously by the development of science and technology,which makes our life more easier and comfortable than before. As far as I'm concerned,the modernization of China can not get rid of science and technology,all kinds of inventions bring us convenience and enjoyment.

  First,vehicle has changed people’s life.Thanks to the plane,our lifes are now faster, more exciting, and more convenient than before.You cant not deny that a plane is fast. For example, a businessman can leave Paris at 11 a.m. in the morning and arrive in New York at 8 a.m. The same morning in time for a day’s work.However, my grand parents lived in a village when they were children, the mainly power come from livestocks and human.When they wanted to go to the city,they choose to get into a carraiage,it took several hours,even one day.

  Second,the medical level has continuously improved, a lot of diseases that were recognised as incurable disease in the past, fortunately they have been vanquished today.Therefore,these medical technology help us prolong life-span.For instance, plague was one kind of condition extremely bad risk infectious disease.In the past,my grand father had suffered a plague,he said that disater killed up to 10,000 people a day at its peak.But now,if you are received effective treatment methods enable to be cured if diagnosed in time. On the other hand,governments pay attention to reform and perfect medical security, which relieves people’s burden and popularized the medical service. In the past, the death date was very high due to laggard medical conditions,having a cold might be fatal,not to speak of severe diseases.

   Last,the internet has become a striking flag in our life,it promotes daily communication among people throughout the world as we can contact with each other from remote distance.For example,I can talk to my friends who are studying overseas through the internet.Whereas people living in the past can only write letters which might take days to be delivered.Also interrnet brings us entertainment as we can browse websites to find whatever materials we like such as movies,videos, and songs.People can therefore relax themselves by spending some time playing on their computer or ipad after a stressful workday.It makes our life convinent and colorful.

  In conclusion, given the reasons described above, I think we live in a better life than out ancestors. Thanks to the development of technology, our life is more convenient. In addition, we are healthier because the medicine is advanced.