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晓野的野的作文贴【欢迎拍砖】【砖管够】【考前每日一练】

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发表于 2013-8-4 23:56:58 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |正序浏览 |阅读模式
手残敲字慢......
脑...呃....

必须把作文练起来!

药药切克闹,每日作文来一套!

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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-24 21:01:58 | 只看该作者
8月24日 独立作文

是否同意政府不應該給藝術家(musician, filmmaker, artist....)任何financial support

应该
1、艺术同科技science and technology一样十分重要,科技都有钱,艺术也应该有钱。是社会发展的重要部分,所以要给钱。
2、艺术能够激发人们的创造力,研究表明艺术领域发达的人更加具有创造力,而创造力对于人们是很重要的。
3、保留传统文化,促进文化多元化发展

Although the economy of our society has rapidly developed, the art areas are seriously short in fund. Here comes a debate. Many people argue that the government should give financial support to artists such as musician and filmmakers since artists play an important role in arts. However, other people disagree. When it comes to me, I think the government should give those musician or filmmakers financial support. Several reasons in different respects will be demonstrated and explained to support my point of view.

First of all, what a good government should do is to improve the living standard of people. Just as the science and technology have a great influence on the living standard of people, so the arts play a crucial role in living standard. Since government spends a great amount of money in the science and technology, the same financial support should also be offered to artists. Unlike some people, who can make much money, the artists can not always gain enough money. Without enough money, they may change their jobs so that citizens can not go to a concert or see a movie, which will lower the living standard of people. Therefore the government should make support artists in financial areas.

In the second place, music and movies can greatly induce the creativity of people, which can greatly influence the development of society. A survey conducted by a prestigious US social research institution, after investigating 32 big cities, has shown that the more the cities that have musician, filmmaker or artists, the better social development the cities will be. From this survey, we can safely draw the conclusion that in order to develop our society well, there is no doubt that the government should spent money in artists.

Last but not least, with enough financial support, the artists can positively affect our traditional culture. Nowadays, people pay too much attention to some modern issues such as computers, on-line games. On the contrary, the traditional culture, which is an important part of our country, is disappearing in our daily life. In order to avoid such situation, we can give some financial support to artists, encouraging them to record our traditional culture. In this way, such culture will show up in our life more frequently and the culture will be carefully protested.

To sum up, it is universally acknowledged that arts play a significant role in our society. Therefore, the government should give financial support to those artists.


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发表于 2013-8-24 18:17:09 | 只看该作者
晓野的野 发表于 2013-8-24 17:17
恩呢!
可以在小分队的作文贴里面留名的啊
队长会帮忙分组

知道呢~我是想找个长期互改的小伙伴,啦啦啦啦
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-24 17:17:19 | 只看该作者
Mint静默 发表于 2013-8-24 13:52
= =!本来想这几天找个人一起互改作文的,没办法了。
晓野明儿给力哟!

恩呢!
可以在小分队的作文贴里面留名的啊
队长会帮忙分组
不用自己找人的
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发表于 2013-8-24 13:52:40 | 只看该作者
晓野的野 发表于 2013-8-24 13:34
明天....................................

= =!本来想这几天找个人一起互改作文的,没办法了。
晓野明儿给力哟!
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-24 13:34:28 | 只看该作者
Mint静默 发表于 2013-8-24 13:04
晓野什么时候考试呀

不好意思,小插一楼

明天....................................
50#
发表于 2013-8-24 13:04:19 | 只看该作者
晓野什么时候考试呀

不好意思,小插一楼
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-23 23:34:03 | 只看该作者
8月23日 独立

As cities in today’s world grow rapidly those decades, a lot of changes shows up in our society: the unemployed rates have been reduced; more children can get educational activities; our living standards have been greatly increased. However, there are also some disadvantages due to the rapid growth of cities such as pollutions. So a debate which has been brought into the focus of the public is that whether the rapid growth of societies is a mostly positive development for the society. When it comes to me, I strongly argue that such growth is a mostly positive development for the society. Here are my reasons.

First of all, it is universally acknowledged that living standard is a crucial indicator for us to evaluate the development of our society. As the cities keep a rapid growth, the living standard has been greatly improved. I still remember how dirty and crowded the city where I lived was ten years ago. Many poor families were even not able to afford their foods. However, everything has changed now. With the rapid growth of cities, our city becomes tidy and clean. Food scarcities no longer are problems of people. People spend money for a healthy lifestyle. This case is not rare in the development of the society. Thus we can safely draw the conclusion that the growth of cities has great influence on the development of the society.

In the second place, another necessary indicator of good development of the society is education. Many years ago, the ratio of the educated population remained in a low level. After the rapid growth of societies, the government can gather more tax from the rapid growth and fund more schools, which greatly encourage children to go to school. A survey conducted by a prestigious US educational research institution, after investigating children from 8 big cities, has shown that such radio has been improved by 52 percent. That's why I think the rapid growth can positively affect the development of our society.

Admittedly, the rapid growth of cities also brings some troubles such as environmental pollution. As a matter of fact, this problem is undeniable during fast growth and the government makes efforts to eliminate the disadvantages in pollutions. Obviously, the advantages of the rapid growth outweigh the disadvantages.

To sum up, the development of the society benefits a lot from the rapid growth of cities. I cannot emphasize to importance of the role played by such growth in the development too much. For the reasons I mentioned above, there is no deny that the rapid growth mostly does good to the development of the society.

我...........这.............
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-22 23:22:24 | 只看该作者
8月22日 独立

今天被气坏了,今天也有开心的事情发生
苦恼的事情很多呢
我不知道我手里的这一副牌到底是好牌还是坏牌
但是既然在我的手里了,就是我的牌
所以,即使,哪怕,它很糟糕,那么,也努力的把它打好

Nowadays our government plans to build art museums and music performance centers, and recreational devices. Considering that the money is limited, the government has to make a choice between art museums and music performance centers and recreational devices. Some people argue that the government should choose to build art museums and music performance center because art museums and music performance center are obviously important than recreational devices. However, I cannot agree with such statement. Several reasons in different respects will be demonstrated and explained to support my point of view.

First of all, we can judge the importance of some issues by considering about the influence that they can have on people. It universally acknowledged that keeping fit is quite crucial for people. Because of the fast development of the society and economy, people have less and less time to spend in recreational exercise. So it is necessary for the government to help people establish a healthy lifestyle. A survey conducted by a prestigious American research institution, after investigating 38 cities about the healthy condition of people and recreational devices, has shown that there is a positive relationship between the number of recreational devices and the healthy condition of people. So we can draw the conclusion that the more we build recreational devices, the healthier people will be.

In the second place, compared with art museums and music performance center, recreational devices attract more people's attention. The more attention some issues can get, the more important the issues will be. There are an art museums and a swimming pool in my city. Everyday, especially in summer, the swimming pool is always full of people. On the contrary, people hardly go to the art museum because people do not show too much interest in it. This case is not rare in our country. So given that example, I don't think museums or music performance center are more than recreational devices.

Admittedly, art museums or music centers play an important role in our life. They provide us with a chance to enjoy arts or music. However, when it comes to the statement that they are more important than recreational devices, I cannot agree. The reasons are obvious: people engage in recreational activities more than in arts activities; people show more interests in recreation devices than in art museums or music centers. Recreational devices not only relax people but also help people keep fit. The advantages of recreational devices surely outnumber the advantages of art museums and music centers.

To sum up, for those reasons mentioned above. There is no doubt that recreational devices are more important than art museums or music centers.
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-8-21 23:33:57 | 只看该作者
8月21日 独立
修改了又修改 问题依然存在
内容平铺直述
语句简单#简直就是个老大难问题#
因为修改之后又加了些内容 字数有些多了
Getting to know each other is crucial for the relationship of people, for the career of future, and for the development of the society and I cannot emphasize the importance of knowing people too much. As people nowadays increasingly spend time reading books or watch movies, we cannot deny that books and movies can have great influence on the personalities of people. So when it comes to the statement that we can learn another person from books and movies the person like, I cannot agree with it any more. Several reasons in different respects will be demonstrated and explained in the passage to support my point of view.

First of all, books people often read and movies people like to watch are key signals to reflect people’s hobbies and habits. Having a good understanding of people's hobbies and habits, we can know people more. Take my best friend Tony who is a big fan of arts as an example. Every time I go to his house, I can find some new books, which are some professional books about the history of arts, the development of arts, famous artists of America, etc. From that I know he is fond of arts. Moreover, I get to know that he is the kind of person who is always willing to help others as long as he can, for he likes movies about heroes and he becomes very excited if the world is protected by heroes. This case is not rare in our daily life. So the common conclusion drawn from this example is that it is reliable to know someone from his or her favorite books or movies.

In the second place, books and movies can shape the personalities of people. Just as the old saying goes, you are what you read. In my experience, I used to be easy to become very angry or upset since I am not good at control my awful emotions. Therefore, I began to read a book named Get Away From Your Bad Mood. To my surprise, I become calm even if something unexpected happened. A survey conducted by a prestigious US research institution, after investigating 2290 people’s personalities after reading books or watching movies, has shown that people’s personalities have a direct relationship with the contents of books or movies.

Admittedly, there is no doubt that the way to know someone from the books or movies s/he likes has some limitations. Therefore, we cannot learn all the personalities from books or movies. However, even if sometimes the books and movies cannot straightly tell us what kind of people they are, books and movies can still give us indirect clues, from which we can search more about people.

To sum up, books and movies people like are very helpful for us to learn about other people. They can reflect people's hobby and habits, which are necessary for us to understand others. Moreover, our personalities can be greatly influenced and shaped by movies and books and therefore getting to know the books and movies is getting to know the characteristics of people. For these reasons, I agree with the idea that we can learn people from books and movies they like.
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