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kang144

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題目是：學校或工作 Presentation 你習慣一個月前就開始準備或有 idea 後才晚一點開始進行

People have different habits on arranging for theirpresentations; some people like to start their preparation until some ideasthat be showed up in the brain, others tend to think that they should start toarrange their presentation beyond a month ago. As my opinion, I think more timeto prepare can result a better presentation; therefore, I believe that peopleshould begin to their arranging for presentation as soon as they can. Here aresome reasons for this.

First of all, a longer period for preparation can generatemore thinking or idea on the presentation. For example, if people start toorganize their preparation earlier, they can receive more information thanthose who start lately. In other words, they could get more suitable materialsto putting into their presentation; meanwhile, they cloud also found severaloutstanding works that they can learn from those works. In addition, startingthe preparation allows people have more time to modify or adjust their works,which is extremely essential to the presentation because this adjustment is thekey factor to making the presentation becomes smooth when people arepresenting. In the adjustment stage, people need to omit some parts of theirwork to control the time of presentation, it have to be control in fifteen ortwenty minutes, not too long or too short. After that, people can start torehearse their presentation until they can sure that all the parts in thepresentation can be perfect. However, some people believe that they shouldstart to arrange their presentation lately until they some ideas for thepresentation because they can finish the preparation rapidly when their ideascome up. Nevertheless, those ideas or thought to the presentation will appearwhen people begin to organize their presentation; therefore, the time is moreinfluential than waiting the ideas pop up.

According the reason above, I believe that people shouldstart to arrange the presentation as soon as they can because the less timethey get the worst quality they have. This is not to say, of course, otherpoints of view are wholly without merit. However, I think these reasons I haveprovided in favor of my point of view are stronger.

ReSlamDunk

楼主写得比我好多了，我也做了你这题，看了你这文章，再看我的，简直不忍直视啊！
楼主写作怎么练啊？》