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haibaraaifly

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+861330000000 |xxx(在) gmail.com
Education
2009-2013(Expected)   Xx university, School of Finance                                                                          xx, China
                                            OverallGPA: 88.91/100 (Top 2 in class, Top 5% in department)
                                            ILETS:7.5 (L:7.5 R: 8.0 W: 7.0 S: 7.0)
Internship                        
09/2012-10/2012           China XX Bank                                                                                                             xx, China
                                            Client Manager Assistant
                                           Sold￥4.1 million worth of short-term wealthmanagement product, top1 in 3 interns.
                                            Processedvisa agent service for more than 10 clients.
                                           Analyzedthe financial and economic scenarios and advised on client’s wealth managementstrategy.
06/2012-08/2012          XX Securities Co. LTD, Asset ManagementHeadquarters                     xx, China
                                          Research Assistant
                                          Contributedto the research and development of the company’s first bond rating fund, XXX and submitted a 12-page reportevaluating the issuing project.
                                         Contactedthe target company and successfully obtained the key information, whichcontributed to the portfolio manager’s 3^rd season investment strategy.
07/2011-08/2011         xx Bank                                                                                                                        xx, China
                                         Mortgage Loan Manager Assistant
                                         Interviewedthe pre-qualified and prospective clients and pacified their doubts regardingthe mortgage loans and repayment schedule.
AWARDS
                                       First Grade Scholarship, top2 in class
                                       Excellent Cadre of Student of City of XX, 100 of all students in XX CITY
                                       National Third Grade Sportsmen in 100- and200-meter run
Activities
2011                               XX Program
                                       Interpretedfor 4 women entrepreneurs during program interview.
2009-2011                    XXX Association
                                       Leadingactors for 4 dramas and 2 stage plays; director for 1 play.
2009-2010                    XX Group
                                       Cofounder;set up the school’s largest student association league with 7 otherassociations.
2008                               Torch Protector for Beijing Olympic Games                                                         xx, China
2008                               Wenchuan Earthquake Volunteer                                                                       XX, China

zhengjiahan

2009-2012(Expected)   有问题吧

-- by 会员 zhengjiahan (2012/10/26 17:56:56)

啊！好致命的错误！感谢！我再去检查检查

-- by 会员 haibaraaifly (2012/10/26 17:58:08)

站内给个Q号吧，我感觉咱俩好像，我是自助游那位

haibaraaifly

2009-2012(Expected)   有问题吧

-- by 会员 zhengjiahan (2012/10/26 17:56:56)

啊！好致命的错误！感谢！我再去检查检查

zhengjiahan

2009-2012(Expected)   有问题吧

haibaraaifly

个人觉得楼主你的课外活动里如果有比较有特点的比如那个volunteer是不是可以也像internship一样详细的说说看。。国外其实还挺看重做慈善或者志愿者的。
汶川地震的志愿者感觉是很加分的内容啊。

-- by 会员 happyhlan (2012/10/26 14:31:23)

哎...我主要还是不知道这个志愿者到底有没有用= =因为一页纸已经写满了...所以还得权衡一下轻重...

happyhlan

个人觉得楼主你的课外活动里如果有比较有特点的比如那个volunteer是不是可以也像internship一样详细的说说看。。国外其实还挺看重做慈善或者志愿者的。
汶川地震的志愿者感觉是很加分的内容啊。

haibaraaifly

呃......好心的朋友们...