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wellmichelle

Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.

A.people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their


B.people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the


C.fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States's, their



D.the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the



E.the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the


为什么不可以选E，我把People concuming fatty foods当一整件事看，行吗？

xohe赵

讨论得太完美了，CD大爱无疆

wengjialan

明白啦~~~多谢多谢~O(∩_∩)O~

DUKB24

想问一下B选项，and 如果连接F和U的话不是应该在and后面加上介词in么？否则不就变成了people in France 和 the United States 的比较了么？

-- by 会员 wengjialan (2012/10/21 16:39:00)

quote:


you're reading the construction as (people in france and the u.s.).
the correct interpretation is people in (france and the u.s.).

if there exists a correct interpretation of a parallel structure, then the existence of incorrect interpretations of that structure doesn't invalidate the correctinterpretation. indeed, there are incorrect interpretations of just about any reasonably complex grammatical structure.

-- by 会员 DUKB24 (2012/10/21 18:14:49)

最高境界大抵如此，，GMAC怎么说就怎么对。。。那我下次再遇到这种情况怎么办呢？
再次感谢。。。！

-- by 会员 wengjialan (2012/10/22 19:14:18)

other choices are fatally wrong


just pick the best out of a bunch


that is the rule

wengjialan

想问一下B选项，and 如果连接F和U的话不是应该在and后面加上介词in么？否则不就变成了people in France 和 the United States 的比较了么？

-- by 会员 wengjialan (2012/10/21 16:39:00)

quote:


you're reading the construction as (people in france and the u.s.).
the correct interpretation is people in (france and the u.s.).

if there exists a correct interpretation of a parallel structure, then the existence of incorrect interpretations of that structure doesn't invalidate the correctinterpretation. indeed, there are incorrect interpretations of just about any reasonably complex grammatical structure.

-- by 会员 DUKB24 (2012/10/21 18:14:49)

最高境界大抵如此，，GMAC怎么说就怎么对。。。那我下次再遇到这种情况怎么办呢？
再次感谢。。。！

DUKB24

想问一下B选项，and 如果连接F和U的话不是应该在and后面加上介词in么？否则不就变成了people in France 和 the United States 的比较了么？

-- by 会员 wengjialan (2012/10/21 16:39:00)

quote:


you're reading the construction as (range;">people in france and the u.s.).
the correct interpretation is people in (range;">france and the u.s.).

if there exists a correct interpretation of a parallel structure, then the existence of incorrect interpretations of that structure doesn't invalidate the correctinterpretation. indeed, there are incorrect interpretations of just about any reasonably complex grammatical structure.

wengjialan

想问一下B选项，and 如果连接F和U的话不是应该在and后面加上介词in么？否则不就变成了people in France 和 the United States 的比较了么？

sisichen666

Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.

A.people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their
B.people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the
C.fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States's, their
D.the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the
E.the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the

为什么不可以选E，我把People concuming fatty foods当一整件事看，行吗？

-- by 会员 wellmichelle (2012/10/6 19:41:39)

呼，刚做完阅读用自己的思路讲下这题


感觉manhattan的forum把这题的考点讨论得很分散


首先，看一道SC，把A选项完整的读一次找出它的intended meaning和suspicious blunder非常非常的重要，尤其是难题，特别多grammatically correct但是意思改变的选项


1.在法国的人们和在美国的人们吃差不多的食品
2.但是法国挂的人比较少

non-underlined portion 表达了一个转折，这个转折make sense      （就是比较对象不对等）

关于你纠结的E选项

可以有两种理解
1.the rate of （ people consuming in....）
第一这改变了意思，你需要出现在核心主干的名词和谓语变成了修饰成分
第二，consuming作为essential modifier 修饰people（首先这缩小了样本的讨论范围）
A选项的people就是人们，没有指代哪群人；但是E选项这个consuming缩小了讨论人群的范围


2. the rate of people consuming （the rate is consuming fatty foods， that is illogical）

关于 N +of+ving这种例子

prep比比皆是，有时候我觉得prep的题目比OG来得经典唯一的缺陷就是没有官方解释（学好每道题目的每个知识点来举一反三）
prep 08 part 2
193. (T-3-Q2)Thehoneybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with theresult that the act of stinging causes the bee to sustaina fatal injury.





because of +ving/noun（其实和那个noun+of+ving是一样道理的） 大部分时候是错的，因为表达不出核心的句意，但是有正确答案的例子，通过意思去分析：
prep08 part 2
172. (GWD7-Q40)Since February, the Federal Reserve has raised its short-term interest ratetarget five times, and because of the economy's continued strength, analystshave been predicting for weeks that the target will be raised again inNovember.

-- by 会员 DUKB24 (2012/10/6 22:40:22)

DUKB24

Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.

A.people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their
B.people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the
C.fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States's, their
D.the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the
E.the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the

为什么不可以选E，我把People concuming fatty foods当一整件事看，行吗？

-- by 会员 wellmichelle (2012/10/6 19:41:39)

呼，刚做完阅读用自己的思路讲下这题


感觉manhattan的forum把这题的考点讨论得很分散


首先，看一道SC，把A选项完整的读一次找出它的intended meaning和suspicious blunder非常非常的重要，尤其是难题，特别多grammatically correct但是意思改变的选项


1.在法国的人们和在美国的人们吃差不多的食品
2.但是法国挂的人比较少

non-underlined portion 表达了一个转折，这个转折make sense      （就是比较对象不对等）

关于你纠结的E选项

可以有两种理解
1.the rate of （ people consuming in....）
第一这改变了意思，你需要出现在核心主干的名词和谓语变成了修饰成分
第二，consuming作为essential modifier 修饰people（首先这缩小了样本的讨论范围）
A选项的people就是人们，没有指代哪群人；但是E选项这个consuming缩小了讨论人群的范围


2. the rate of people consuming （the rate is consuming fatty foods， that is illogical）

关于 N +of+ving这种例子

prep比比皆是，有时候我觉得prep的题目比OG来得经典唯一的缺陷就是没有官方解释（学好每道题目的每个知识点来举一反三）
prep 08 part 2
193. (T-3-Q2) Thehoneybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with theresult that the act of stinging causes the bee to sustaina fatal injury.





because of +ving/noun（其实和那个noun+of+ving是一样道理的） 大部分时候是错的，因为表达不出核心的句意，但是有正确答案的例子，通过意思去分析：
prep08 part 2
172. (GWD7-Q40)Since February, the Federal Reserve has raised its short-term interest ratetarget five times, and because of the economy's continued strength, analystshave been predicting for weeks that the target will be raised again inNovember.

sisichen666

E选项已经改变了原文的意思，题目要比较的是the rate of consumption而不是rate of people，尽管consuming fatty food做后置修饰，但是意思重心已经改变了