刚写的作文，求大神指导！！！

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还有两天就考试了，这次有点裸考了，因为天太热，厌学啊，IBT的作文不是很明白。刚写了一篇关于喜欢单独旅行还是结伴旅行的作文，希望大神们帮忙瞅瞅，看看结构和语法啥的 有没有问题，怎么改进~ 拜谢！Some people would like to travel alone with one bag. Otherswould love to travel in a group or even with a traveling agency. Personally,traveling with a companion is my preference. The following are my reasons.


In the first place, traveling with a companion, especially agood friend, makes your trip fantastic. When I traveled to Los Angeles with myfriend, Petrova, we shared the traveling experience we had before. She designedthe best route we could follow and I booked the tickets for both of us, whichsave us a lot of time and trouble. We took pictures of each other whenever wewanted, while you could not do it when you travel alone. She even had a fewfriends there. We met them and even had a party together. Her friends becameour guides and made the best use of our schedule. We had a lot of fun and itwill not happen if I travel alone.

Furthermore, you can have someone by your side when youtravel with a companion. Sometimes, you may come across some bad things, suchas a cold or some terrible physical reaction to the new places. In some specialsituation, you may lose your money or your identification. If you have a friendbeside you, you can easily go through these troubles with his help. You cantake care of each other and feel safe together when you travel in a strangeplace. Moreover, the two people can be the reminder of each other. My friendMohit almost lost his luggage what if his traveling partner did not remind himwhen they flied back to America after the summer.

Finally, the best thing to travel together is sharing. I loveroad traveling. I even imagine traveling from New York to California using mycar. However, it is so exhausting if I decide to travel alone. It would be niceif I have someone who could also drive to travel with me. We could take turnsto drive which will be more efficient to travel and much safer. Besides, wecould share gas fees during the journey and we may share one standard room in ahotel.

In short, although there are some advantages to travelalone, I prefer to have someone around when I travel. It makes me feel safe andmakes my journey more enjoyable.
字数400好像，我也不清楚要多少字合适哎，有知道的也麻烦提点一下哈

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自己顶~ 等待牛人指点啊

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沙发！坐等呢，哪位亲给说说啊