推荐信，请给位大神给润色下，看看有啥要改的，，，，虚心求教

小楼独醉

To Whom It May Concern,



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zhangjun1118

再者，近年来海归博士也多了，他们的英文写作你敢说都不好？
呐，我找了一个海归老师帮我写rl，他二话没说，还洋洋洒洒写了好多。。。
写的比此文中的中介好不得了。。

zhangjun1118

其实推荐信语法没有特别重要，写得太好太模板别人会以为是假的。你帮给中介的钱给我一半，我能写出比这好十倍的。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/27 21:52:56)

why do you think Chinese professors dont have a good command of English writing? ... So stereotyped

-- by 会员 zhangjun1118 (2012/3/28 10:37:03)

你知道中国教授怎么写英文吗？他们学的英文和现在的不一样，写作风格也不是我们的风格。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/28 10:42:52)

有些教授英文是不敢恭维， 有些教授英文还是可以的。
话说多数同学DIY或让中介写千篇一律的模板文，我追求一点完美写好了写出感情没有语法错误怎了？为啥能避免的错误不去避免？
我不知道中国教授怎么写英文的，麻烦版主告知下，10/20年前的英文怎么不一样？


写得太好太模板别人会以为是假的。你帮给中介的钱给我一半，我能写出比这好十倍的。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/27 21:52:56)

还有敢问如何定义写的好？！你写出来的比这个好十倍？。。。呵呵

普渡哥

其实推荐信语法没有特别重要，写得太好太模板别人会以为是假的。你帮给中介的钱给我一半，我能写出比这好十倍的。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/27 21:52:56)

why do you think Chinese professors dont have a good command of English writing? ... So stereotyped

-- by 会员 zhangjun1118 (2012/3/28 10:37:03)

你知道中国教授怎么写英文吗？他们学的英文和现在的不一样，写作风格也不是我们的风格。

zhangjun1118

其实推荐信语法没有特别重要，写得太好太模板别人会以为是假的。你帮给中介的钱给我一半，我能写出比这好十倍的。

-- by 会员 普渡哥 (2012/3/27 21:52:56)

why do you think Chinese professors dont have a good command of English writing? ... So stereotyped

KnightBM

RL如果不是牛推，推荐新的内容美国那边的录取委员会并不会仔细阅读分析的，所以不用太在意，注意适度真实就行了！

普渡哥

免费的只能套各种模板了。。。不过不值得在推荐信上花很多钱吧

小楼独醉

版主大人饶命啊，能搞个免费的不？

小楼独醉

普渡哥

其实推荐信语法没有特别重要，写得太好太模板别人会以为是假的。你帮给中介的钱给我一半，我能写出比这好十倍的。