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030 It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why？Use specific reasons and details in your answer.

Currently, there is an idea that builds a new high school in our neighborhood. Some people think it is a good idea, while some people deem that it will bring some negative effects to us. As far as I am concerned, the former makes sense.
First of all, building a new high school can reduce/bring down the unemployment here. Nowadays, due to the increasing population in our country, job hunting becomes so difficult that many individuals here cannot find a job they want. So if building a new high school, the depressed emotion for job hunting will be alleviated much. Moreover, the crime rate also will be decreased attribute to the improvement of income.
In addition, the education condition will be better after building a new high school in this district. With better education, people will be able to build a better community in harmony with nature. Schools which provide children with good education nearby our neighborhood are so few that many children have to attend school far away from their home. For example, when I was a student in high school, I went to a famous high school far away from home by bike because there is no high school nearby. So when I can study nearby home, I will have time to come back home at noon for healthy lunch as well as have a good rest. Consequently, I will have enough energy to study well for everything I like.
Finally, we can not ignore that a new high school often stimulate many businesses such as book shops, fast food restaurant as well as café shop emerging. When we walk along after dinner, we can have a coffee leisurely sitting in a small café or spend our hours in a book shop choosing same books we love. What’s more, financial burden will be ease by collecting tax from the high school.
To sum up, building a new school is a good idea not only because it brings our community more job opportunities, government tax, but it also produces a lot of places for enjoying our lives.

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