Argument 題的例子須要真例嗎?

fattybabe

例如我須要很detail地說出xxxx公司在xxxxxx推出了.......etc 証明了加薪不是the only reason to improve the productivity.

或是


For example, if the company on the next street got a overall productivity increased without increasing on the salary. it proves that salary is not the only factor.


這個"假如"的例子又好可以嗎 ?