OG12-38 求教！！！！！！！！！！！！！！

jianhu8246

38. In 1850, Lucretia Mott published her Discourse on
Women, arguing in a treatise for women to have equal
political and legal rights and for changes in the
married women’s property laws.
(A) arguing in a treatise for women to have equal
political and legal rights
(B) arguing in a treatise for equal political and legal
rights for women
(C) a treatise that advocates women’s equal political
and legal rights
(D) a treatise advocating women’s equal political
and legal rights
(E) a treatise that argued for equal political and
legal rights for women
Parallelism; Rhetorical construction

我就想不明白了  A B的 ARGUING IN A TREATISE 怎么就 WORDY AND IMPRECISE 了？  那里就啰嗦和不准确了啊  请NN给个解释啊! 像这样的类型的题目 如何判断到底是怎么啰嗦 了  毕竟都没给出很明显的错误

angelcity

恩,我觉得是"published her discourse on women"后面接着又说"arguing in a treatise for women"有wordy的感觉

sophia000

因为这里可以直接用同位语，而使用arguing in 后面又加了a treatise显然比直接用同位语要wordy