觉得是小学水平，麻烦牛人帮忙改一下，主要是构思方面

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Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship

From my point of view, I agree with this stastement that Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
There are many relationship for us in the society. For example, the relationship with our parents is very important in our daily life. We love them, and our love should base on the honesty. When I was 8, I did not get a good grade in the examination, I felt very sad and afraid that my parents may beat me for this grade. So I lied to them. They believed me at first, but oneday they got the truth from my teacher, they felt very disappionted . From then on, they didn’t believe me any more. So I think it’s a pity for me and my parents.
Moreover, we also treat the friendship as an important part in our life. In my opnion,
A good friend should have many characteristics, such as honesty, loyaty, humorous and so on. The honesty is the essential part of it. I f we can not keep honest with our friend, we can’t keep our relationship long. To illustruate, I have two good friends in the middle school, Lily and halen, we always play around at that time. I have believed that we would keep friends fpr forever. However, in the summer in 2000, we broken up. Lily wore a new dress and asked our feelings for the dress, both me and helen did not like that dress, but we knew it’s a present from her dad and she likes it very much, we don’t want her disappionted, so we did not tell her the truth. However, when she wore this dress to the school, many students laughed at her and made her very sad. At that time, we have to tell her the truth that the dress does not fit her, but she did not forgive us. We loss our best friend at last.
From this thing, I know that tell the truth for ones who you love and trust,or  you may hurt them.
In addition, some people may think that we should tell the truth to the people you like, but how about to the strangers? Well, everyone, keep honesty all the time. A study from the scientist shows that almost 85% successful people never lie to somebody, which indicates that if you want to succeed in the society, you should make others believe you, then trust you , and not lie to you. which will offer some opportunities to you, if you catch and make full use them, you may succeed.
To sum up, the best way to keep relationship with different kinds of people is that __telling the truth all the time!
我觉得这种按relationship 的分类可行吗？求高人指点