请教GWD10 的语法问题

gmatziyu

请问为什么答案是C 不是E呢？

The results of the company’s cost- cutting measures are evident in its profits, which increased five percent during the first three months of this year after it fell over the last two years.
A. which increased five percent during the first three months of this year after it fell
B. which had increased five percent during the first three months of this year after it had fallen
C. which have increased five percent during the first three months of this year after falling
D. with a five percent increase during the first three months of this year after falling
E. with a five percent increase during the first three months of this year after having fallen

enkyklios

我做过一个关于with的总结，里边正好有这一题，我给你复制过来以供参考，

OG13-90 The results of the company's cost-cutting measures are evident in its profits, which increased 5 percent during the first 3 months of this year after it fell over the last two years.
(A) which increased five percent during the first three months of this year after it fell
(B) which had increased five percent during the first three months of this year after it had fallen
(C) which have increased 5 percent during the first 3 months of this year after falling C正确
(D) with a 5 percent increase during the first 3 months of this year after falling
(E) with a 5 percent increase during the first 3 months of this year after having fallen

D,E中after falling /having fallen都不对，因为在C after  falling ……它是省略了的状语从句，它的主语就是前边的which,但是在with结构中这种省略就完全没有办法理解了，或者只能理解成句子的主语---显然错误。但我重点说的不是这个，我认为即使没有after falling的错误，D和E的with用法也不对。

大家对照一下；我们看个例子；Village adopts budget with 1% tax increase 。（含有税收增长的预算）这个是正确的用法，我们可以说with 5 percent profits increase,也可以说with an 5 percent increases in profits，还可以说MPD reports striking profits with increase in sales
但是profits with increase 不行，
如果按定语来看；with结构它不是一个分词，它不能和修饰词是主谓的关系，它不能使profits自己增长起来（我突然就想起来一句话，叫不能拎着自己的头发离开地球）
如果按状语来看；随着增长这只是半句话，应该是随着某事某物的增长。

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牛掰 发表于 2013-5-7 19:56
楼主你好，估计这个问题被解决了吧，这是RON的回答，很有针对性的对你的问题进行了解答，贴过来了

in gene ...

同意！               

Ivy蓝蓝蓝蓝

lindalinfuxi 发表于 2018-2-13 21:15
看到正确答案，突然想到RON讲的 "A modifier must be either blocked off by commas or not blocked off by ...

但是ron上课说这句话的时候还有一句：除了这个modifier在开头或结尾。因为这种情况下有一个已经写成句号了，而且这题每个选项都是一边逗号，一边句号，不存在split就不用为这个疑惑～

lindalinfuxi

看到正确答案，突然想到RON讲的 "A modifier must be either blocked off by commas or not blocked off by commas. You cannot block off a modifier with a comma on one side but not on the other".
正确答案C里面不是刚好犯了这个错误吗？
C. which have increased five percent during the first three months of this year after falling
只有前面没划线部分有Comma,后面没有comma啊？

有没有大牛可以解释一下？

lisaxiwm

chenye666 发表于 2017-9-29 15:23
有道理！附上ron神的解释："after having VERBed" is, in general, a redundant construction -- the word ...

同意！               

chenye666

dealchan 发表于 2017-7-31 16:25
after having done是wordy的，因为after已经是表示一种consequence，have done也是表示一种consequence ...

有道理！附上ron神的解释："after having VERBed" is, in general, a redundant construction -- the word "after" is already there, so "having" doesn't contribute anything. if you see this construction, you should generally be able to replace it with "after VERBing".

chenye666

纪小公举 发表于 2017-3-30 00:19
弱弱的问一句，这个题没有人觉得A B C选项的increase five percent有问题吗？不应该是increase BY five per ...

增长了5%，没有问题啊，为啥要用by呢

chenye666

erkuai9526 发表于 2015-8-26 18:02
either "increased" or "have increased" would make sense, depending on context. if the sentence is  ...

你好，我认为不应该用increased，因为第一，再整句话当中，increase和fall两个动作是有先后顺序的，如果fall是fell，那么increase肯定不能用increased；另外，一般过去时是指已经结束的动作，跟现在没有关系，而现在完成时是指过去的动作一直持续到现在，或者过去的动作结束了，但是产生的影响一直到现在。明显，本题的意思是，这个措施及其影响会继续持续下去，因此不能用一般过去时。

dealchan

gmatziyu 发表于 2010-3-14 12:58
感觉这个前面应该用having fallen才对。。。为什么用falling 也可以呢....with 从句仔细看了看也不好，因为 ...

after having done是wordy的，因为after已经是表示一种consequence，have done也是表示一种consequence

阿噗

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