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Day36
1.(101)The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.  
(A) to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs
(B) to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing
(C) is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs
(D) is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs
(E) is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing

2.(102)Unlike a female grizzly bear in the Rockies, which typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles, a male's range will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as many as 600.        
(A) Unlike a female grizzly bear in the Rockies, which typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles, a male's range will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as
(B) Unlike the range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies, typically occupying 50 to 300 square miles, a male will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally so
(C) While the typical range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies is 50 to 300 square miles, with males, their range can cover 200 to 500 square miles and occasionally so
(D) Whereas a female grizzly bear in the Rockies typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles, a male will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as
(E) The typical range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies is 50 to 300 square miles, unlike males, which will cover 200 to 500 square miles and occasionally as

3.(103)The parachutelike membranes of Africa's scaly-tailed flying squirrels differ from those of the flying squirrels in the family Sciuridae because they are attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow instead of the wrist.      
(A) because they are attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow instead of
(B) because of being attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow rather than at
(C) in their attachment to a cartilage rod at the elbow instead of being attached at
(D) in that they are attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow rather than at
(E) in their being attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow instead of

4.(104)The yield per acre of coffee berries varies enormously in that a single tree, depending on both its size and on climate and altitude, could produce enough berries to make between one and twelve pounds of dried beans a year.               
(A) enormously in that a single tree, depending on both its size and on climate and altitude, could produce
(B) enormously in that a single tree, dependent on its size and also on climate and altitude, is able to produce
(C) enormously, because a single tree, depending on its size and on climate and altitude, is able to produce
(D) enormously, because a single tree, being dependent on its size, climate, and altitude, is capable of producing
(E) enormously, because a single tree, dependent both on its size as well as on climate and altitude, could produce

5.(105)2001 proved to be the automaker's first losing year since 1992, when the company had lost $7.4 billion, which was primarily because of almost $7 billion in accounting charges.        
(A) when the company had lost $7.4 billion, which was primarily because of
(B) when the company had lost $7.4 billion, primarily resulting from
(C) when the company lost $7.4 billion, primarily because of
(D) which is when the company lost $7.4 billion, and that was primarily because of
(E) which is when the company lost $7.4 billion, primarily resulting from

6.(106)As with those of humans, the DNA of grape plants contains sites where certain unique sequences of nucleotides are repeated over and over.               
(A) As with those of humans, the DNA of grape plants contains sites where
(B) As human DNA, the DNA of grape plants contain sites in which
(C) As it is with human DNA, the DNA of grape plants, containing sites in which
(D) Like humans, the DNA of grape plants contain sites where
(E) Like human DNA, the DNA of grape plants contains sites in which

7.(107)Galileo did not invent the telescope, but on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made, he quickly built his own device from an organ pipe and spectacle lenses.         
(A) Galileo did not invent the telescope, but on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made, he
(B) Galileo had not invented the telescope, but when he heard, in 1609, of such an optical instrument having been made,
(C) Galileo, even though he had not invented the telescope, on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made, he
(D) Even though Galileo did not invent the telescope, on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made,
(E) Even though Galileo did not invent the telescope, but when he heard, in 1609, of such an optical instrument being made, he   

8.(108)In the United States, while the number of foreign-born residents and their children is higher than ever, the percentage of the population they represent is not; in 1910 this group made up 35 percent of the population when compared to 20 percent in 2000.         
(A) population when compared to 20 percent in 2000
(B) population as compared to 2000, when it was 20 percent
(C) population, comparing it with 20 percent in 2000
(D) population, unlike 2000, with 20 percent
(E) population, compared with 20 percent in 2000

9.(109)Unlike psychiatrists, who are trained as medical doctors, psychologists have historically been forbidden from prescribing their patients drugs, but in 2002 New Mexico began to grant the privilege of prescribing to licensed, doctoral level psychologists who complete an additional training and certification program.      
(A) psychologists have historically been forbidden from prescribing their patients drugs, but in 2002 New Mexico began to grant the privilege of prescribing
(B) psychologists have historically been forbidden to prescribe drugs for their patients, but in 2002 New Mexico began granting prescribing privileges
(C) psychologists have historically been forbidden to prescribe their patients drugs, but in 2002 in New Mexico, the privilege to prescribe began to be granted
(D) historically psychologists have been forbidden from prescribing their patients drugs, but in 2002 New Mexico began to grant the privilege of prescribing
(E) historically psychologists have been forbidden from prescribing drugs for their patients, but in 2002 in New Mexico, they began granting prescribing privileges

10.(110)The ivory-billed woodpecker, once the largest woodpecker in North America at a striking 20 inches tall, has moved in and out of the extinct category, with scientists consistently unable to find solid proof for the bird to still exist.     
(A) for the bird to still exist
(B) for the bird as still existing
(C) for the bird's continued existence
(D) that the bird still exists
(E) of the bird and its continued existence

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Day36
1.(101)The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.  
(A) to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs
(B) to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing
(C) is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs
(D) is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs
(E) is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing

2.(102)Unlike a female grizzly bear in the Rockies, which typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles, a male's range will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as many as 600.        
(A) Unlike a female grizzly bear in the Rockies, which typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles, a male's range will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as
(B) Unlike the range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies, typically occupying 50 to 300 square miles, a male will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally so
(C) While the typical range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies is 50 to 300 square miles, with males, their range can cover 200 to 500 square miles and occasionally so
(D) Whereas a female grizzly bear in the Rockies typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles, a male will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as
(E) The typical range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies is 50 to 300 square miles, unlike males, which will cover 200 to 500 square miles and occasionally as

3.(103)The parachutelike membranes of Africa's scaly-tailed flying squirrels differ from those of the flying squirrels in the family Sciuridae because they are attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow instead of the wrist.      
(A) because they are attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow instead of
(B) because of being attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow rather than at
(C) in their attachment to a cartilage rod at the elbow instead of being attached at
(D) in that they are attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow rather than at
(E) in their being attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow instead of

4.(104)The yield per acre of coffee berries varies enormously in that a single tree, depending on both its size and on climate and altitude, could produce enough berries to make between one and twelve pounds of dried beans a year.               
(A) enormously in that a single tree, depending on both its size and on climate and altitude, could produce
(B) enormously in that a single tree, dependent on its size and also on climate and altitude, is able to produce
(C) enormously, because a single tree, depending on its size and on climate and altitude, is able to produce
(D) enormously, because a single tree, being dependent on its size, climate, and altitude, is capable of producing
(E) enormously, because a single tree, dependent both on its size as well as on climate and altitude, could produce

5.(105)2001 proved to be the automaker's first losing year since 1992, when the company had lost $7.4 billion, which was primarily because of almost $7 billion in accounting charges.        
(A) when the company had lost $7.4 billion, which was primarily because of
(B) when the company had lost $7.4 billion, primarily resulting from
(C) when the company lost $7.4 billion, primarily because of
(D) which is when the company lost $7.4 billion, and that was primarily because of
(E) which is when the company lost $7.4 billion, primarily resulting from

6.(106)As with those of humans, the DNA of grape plants contains sites where certain unique sequences of nucleotides are repeated over and over.               
(A) As with those of humans, the DNA of grape plants contains sites where
(B) As human DNA, the DNA of grape plants contain sites in which
(C) As it is with human DNA, the DNA of grape plants, containing sites in which
(D) Like humans, the DNA of grape plants contain sites where
(E) Like human DNA, the DNA of grape plants contains sites in which

7.(107)Galileo did not invent the telescope, but on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made, he quickly built his own device from an organ pipe and spectacle lenses.         
(A) Galileo did not invent the telescope, but on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made, he
(B) Galileo had not invented the telescope, but when he heard, in 1609, of such an optical instrument having been made,
(C) Galileo, even though he had not invented the telescope, on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made, he
(D) Even though Galileo did not invent the telescope, on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made,
(E) Even though Galileo did not invent the telescope, but when he heard, in 1609, of such an optical instrument being made, he   

8.(108)In the United States, while the number of foreign-born residents and their children is higher than ever, the percentage of the population they represent is not; in 1910 this group made up 35 percent of the population when compared to 20 percent in 2000.         
(A) population when compared to 20 percent in 2000
(B) population as compared to 2000, when it was 20 percent
(C) population, comparing it with 20 percent in 2000
(D) population, unlike 2000, with 20 percent
(E) population, compared with 20 percent in 2000

9.(109)Unlike psychiatrists, who are trained as medical doctors, psychologists have historically been forbidden from prescribing their patients drugs, but in 2002 New Mexico began to grant the privilege of prescribing to licensed, doctoral level psychologists who complete an additional training and certification program.      
(A) psychologists have historically been forbidden from prescribing their patients drugs, but in 2002 New Mexico began to grant the privilege of prescribing
(B) psychologists have historically been forbidden to prescribe drugs for their patients, but in 2002 New Mexico began granting prescribing privileges
(C) psychologists have historically been forbidden to prescribe their patients drugs, but in 2002 in New Mexico, the privilege to prescribe began to be granted
(D) historically psychologists have been forbidden from prescribing their patients drugs, but in 2002 New Mexico began to grant the privilege of prescribing
(E) historically psychologists have been forbidden from prescribing drugs for their patients, but in 2002 in New Mexico, they began granting prescribing privileges

10.(110)The ivory-billed woodpecker, once the largest woodpecker in North America at a striking 20 inches tall, has moved in and out of the extinct category, with scientists consistently unable to find solid proof for the bird to still exist.     
(A) for the bird to still exist
(B) for the bird as still existing
(C) for the bird's continued existence
(D) that the bird still exists
(E) of the bird and its continued existence

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1.d
2.d
3.D
ACE 不平行
B because of加了句子
4.c
5.c
6.e
7.a
c 双主语 Galileo和he
8.e
9.b不确定
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1.(101)The electronics company has unveiled what it claims to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.  
(A) to be the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs
(B) to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing
(C) is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs
(D) is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs
(E) is the world's smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing
B
The length of which is and it weighs不平行，排除A；which is…and it weighs…it 和which重复，排除C；the world’s 不如in the world，排除D；which is that of冗杂排除E

2.(102)Unlike a female grizzly bear in the Rockies, which typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles, a male's range will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as many as 600.        
(A) Unlike a female grizzly bear in the Rockies, which typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles, a male's range will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as
(B) Unlike the range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies, typically occupying 50 to 300 square miles, a male will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally so
(C) While the typical range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies is 50 to 300 square miles, with males, their range can cover 200 to 500 square miles and occasionally so
(D) Whereas a female grizzly bear in the Rockies typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles, a male will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as
(E) The typical range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies is 50 to 300 square miles, unlike males, which will cover 200 to 500 square miles and occasionally as
D
A female和a male’s range比较对象不平行，排除A; the range和a male无法比较排除B；with mails, their range表达赘述，so many as一般用于否定，排除C；the range 和males对比，排除E

3.(103)The parachutelike membranes of Africa's scaly-tailed flying squirrels differ from those of the flying squirrels in the family Sciuridae because they are attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow instead of the wrist.      
(A) because they are attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow instead of
(B) because of being attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow rather than at
(C) in their attachment to a cartilage rod at the elbow instead of being attached at
(D) in that they are attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow rather than at
(E) in their being attached to a cartilage rod at the elbow instead of
D because of+n.排除B；being attached排除C；their being attached 排除E
4.(104)The yield per acre of coffee berries varies enormously in that a single tree, depending on both its size and on climate and altitude, could produce enough berries to make between one and twelve pounds of dried beans a year.               
(A) enormously in that a single tree, depending on both its size and on climate and altitude, could produce
(B) enormously in that a single tree, dependent on its size and also on climate and altitude, is able to produce
(C) enormously, because a single tree, depending on its size and on climate and altitude, is able to produce
(D) enormously, because a single tree, being dependent on its size, climate, and altitude, is capable of producing
(E) enormously, because a single tree, dependent both on its size as well as on climate and altitude, could produce
C
Both…and…不对称排除AB being dependent on排除D；both…as well as搭配错误排除E

5.(105)2001 proved to be the automaker's first losing year since 1992, when the company had lost $7.4 billion, which was primarily because of almost $7 billion in accounting charges.        
(A) when the company had lost $7.4 billion, which was primarily because of
(B) when the company had lost $7.4 billion, primarily resulting from
(C) when the company lost $7.4 billion, primarily because of
(D) which is when the company lost $7.4 billion, and that was primarily because of
(E) which is when the company lost $7.4 billion, primarily resulting from
C
Which修饰billion，排除A；没标志提示需要使用过去完成时，排除B；which is when表达赘述，排除D E

6.(106)As with those of humans, the DNA of grape plants contains sites where certain unique sequences of nucleotides are repeated over and over.               
(A) As with those of humans, the DNA of grape plants contains sites where
(B) As human DNA, the DNA of grape plants contain sites in which
(C) As it is with human DNA, the DNA of grape plants, containing sites in which
(D) Like humans, the DNA of grape plants contain sites where
(E) Like human DNA, the DNA of grape plants contains sites in which
E
As+n.表示“作为…”和“以…身份”排除A B; 句子不完整排除C；humans与DNA比较对象不等同，排除D

7.(107)Galileo did not invent the telescope, but on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made, he quickly built his own device from an organ pipe and spectacle lenses.         
(A) Galileo did not invent the telescope, but on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made, he
(B) Galileo had not invented the telescope, but when he heard, in 1609, of such an optical instrument having been made,
(C) Galileo, even though he had not invented the telescope, on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made, he
(D) Even though Galileo did not invent the telescope, on hearing, in 1609, that such an optical instrument had been made,
(E) Even though Galileo did not invent the telescope, but when he heard, in 1609, of such an optical instrument being made, he   
A
But后面缺主语，排除B；Galileo与he为双主语，排除C；缺主语，排除D；being made不简洁，排除E

8.(108)In the United States, while the number of foreign-born residents and their children is higher than ever, the percentage of the population they represent is not; in 1910 this group made up 35 percent of the population when compared to 20 percent in 2000.         
(A) population when compared to 20 percent in 2000
(B) population as compared to 2000, when it was 20 percent
(C) population, comparing it with 20 percent in 2000
(D) population, unlike 2000, with 20 percent
(E) population, compared with 20 percent in 2000
E
When的先行词应该为时间，排除A；it指代不明，排除C；population与2000比较不对等，排除D

9.(109)Unlike psychiatrists, who are trained as medical doctors, psychologists have historically been forbidden from prescribing their patients drugs, but in 2002 New Mexico began to grant the privilege of prescribing to licensed, doctoral level psychologists who complete an additional training and certification program.      
(A) psychologists have historically been forbidden from prescribing their patients drugs, but in 2002 New Mexico began to grant the privilege of prescribing
(B) psychologists have historically been forbidden to prescribe drugs for their patients, but in 2002 New Mexico began granting prescribing privileges
(C) psychologists have historically been forbidden to prescribe their patients drugs, but in 2002 in New Mexico, the privilege to prescribe began to be granted
(D) historically psychologists have been forbidden from prescribing their patients drugs, but in 2002 New Mexico began to grant the privilege of prescribing
(E) historically psychologists have been forbidden from prescribing drugs for their patients, but in 2002 in New Mexico, they began granting prescribing privileges
A
Be forbidden from doing sth.排除B C; begin to do sth.开始做某事，排除E；与psychiatrist比较，给出比较主体，排除D

10.(110)The ivory-billed woodpecker, once the largest woodpecker in North America at a striking 20 inches tall, has moved in and out of the extinct category, with scientists consistently unable to find solid proof for the bird to still exist.     
(A) for the bird to still exist
(B) for the bird as still existing
(C) for the bird's continued existence
(D) that the bird still exists
(E) of the bird and its continued existence
D

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1.
答案：D
解析：
A.and前后不平行，错误，前面是定语从句后面是完整句子。it指代不明，错误。
B.which就近修饰world，错误（？）。weighing修饰了主句的company，逻辑语义被改变，错误。
C.which就近修饰world，错误（？）。it指代不明，错误。and前后不平行，错误，前面是定语从句后面是完整句子。
D.it claims作插入语。
E.weighing修饰了主句的company，逻辑语义被改变，错误。

2.
答案：D
解析：
A.unlike的比较对象不对等，错误。
B.unlike的比较对象不对等，错误。“so...as”结构只能用于否定句，“as...as”能用于肯定句和否定句。
C.“with males，their...”的表达wordy不简洁。“so...as”结构只能用于否定句，“as...as”能用于肯定句和否定句。
E.unlike的比较对象不对等，错误。which就近修饰males，逻辑语义错误，males不能cover长度或范围，which应该修饰range。

3.
答案：D
解析：
A.because使用错误，前后二者之间并没有因果关系，不应该使用because。instead of后面不应该省略at，否则会造成是替换attach to...后面内容的歧义（？）。
B.because of being...表达不简洁，wordy。because of使用错误，前后二者之间并没有因果关系，不应该使用because of。
C.attach的名词形式不如动词形式简洁，不优选。being attached at表达不简洁，wordy。
D.这里是"...differ from...in that..."结构。这里的in that不表因为。
E.their being...表达不简洁。instead of后面不应该省略at，否则会造成是替换attach to...后面内容的歧义（？）。

4.
答案：C
解析：
A."both...and..."前后结构不平行，错误。
B.and also语意重复，不优选。dependent的含义与depend有所不同（？）。
D.being dependant表达不简洁。dependent的含义与depend有所不同（？）。
E.both与as well as搭配，错误。dependent的含义与depend有所不同（？）。

5.
答案：C
解析：
A.which用于修饰前面整句话，错误。无需使用过去完成时时态表达过去的过去，因为本句中有具体年份，二者的时间关系已经明确。
B.resulting from不用作状语修饰，通常只用于形容词性修饰语，所以前面通常不加逗号。无需使用过去完成时时态表达过去的过去，因为本句中有具体年份，二者的时间关系已经明确。
D.that单独使用，错误。which is when表达不简洁。and不能用于主句和从句的平行。
E.which is when表达不简洁。resulting from不用作状语修饰，通常只用于形容词性修饰语，所以前面通常不加逗号。

6.
答案：E
解析：
A.as with的意思是“关于”，不能表比较。指代抽象地点不能使用where，应该用in which。
B.as+名词。意为“作为”，语义错误。
C.主句少谓语，导致句子结构不完整，错误。
D.like的比较对象不对等，错误。指代抽象地点不能使用where，应该用in which。

7.
答案：A
解析：
B.but后面的结构少谓语，导致句子结构不完整，错误。but前面的句子使用过去完成时时态错误，没有依据要使用过去的过去。
C.前面已经有主语Galileo，所以后面的he多余，双主语，错误。少主语，导致句子结构不完整，错误。前面的句子使用过去完成时时态错误，没有依据要使用过去的过去。
D.少主语，导致句子结构不完整，错误。
E.even  though和but连用，错误，让步和转折不能一起使用。being不优选。but前后结构不平行，错误。

8.
答案：E
解析：
A."when compared to..."省略了主语，而通常从句与主句的主语相同时才会省略主语，所以，when从句的主语应看成是this group，那么就会导致compare to前后的比较对象不可比（一个是group，一个是percent），错误。
B.it完全指代，错误，1910年的人口比例和2000年的人口比例并不是同一事物。compare to前后的比较对象不可比，错误。
C.it指代不明，错误。comparing用作了主动语态，错误，percentage不能自发地去进行比较。
D.unlike的比较对象不对等，错误，将年份和人口比例进行了比较。

9.
答案：B
解析：
A.forbid from doing用法错误，forbid只能搭配不定式使用。
C.“in New Mexico, the privilege to prescribe began to be granted”表达不简洁，wordy。"the privilege began to be granted..."表意不佳，因为privilege不能自发地去授予...。the privilege to...并不是习惯用语，正确用法应该是the privilege of doing。
D.unlike放句首时，主句要立马给出比较对象。forbid from doing用法错误，forbid只能搭配不定式使用。
E.they指代不明，错误。unlike放句首时，主句要立马给出比较对象。forbid from doing用法错误，forbid只能搭配不定式使用。

10.
答案：D
解析：
A.proof for....不优选。for the bird to still exist表达awkward（？）。
B.proof for....不优选。bird as still existing表达awkward（?）。
C.continued existence的表达不简洁。proof for....不优选。
D.that同位语结构优选。
E.continued existence的表达不简洁。of通常表所属关系，proof of bird的意思变成了“鸟的证据”，逻辑语义改变，错误。and后面的its continued existence与solid proof并列，作find的宾语，不符合逻辑语义。

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