求助OGSC87

chenlujing

OG 87.According to scientists who monitored its path, an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, which brightened the Northern Lights and also possibly knocking out a communications satellite.

(A) an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, which brightened the Northern Lights and also possibly knocking

(B) an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun was what recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, and it brightened the Northern Lights and also possibly knocked

(C) an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, brightening the Northern Lights and possibly knocking

(D) a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, recently triggered by an expanding cloud of energized particles, brightened the Northern Lights and it possibly

knocked

(E) a large storm in the magnetic field surrounding Earth was recently triggered by an expanding cloud of energized particles, brightening the Northern Lights and it possibly knocked Logical predication; Rhetorical construction;

求问未划线its指代什么

还有句子的是主语到底是cloud 还是particles

vicar

c选项 brightening 在这个地方不应该修饰surround？

典座

freethebmw 发表于 2015-6-21 20:29
这道题我们要从语义的角度去理解，第一句话讲了scientists who monitored its path，这里的its总要有个指代 ...

同意！               

jamessage

c选项里面，为什么可以用surrounds呢？不需要用过去式吗？

YLC01

我了解這題主要是考平行，但總結的時候有一個問題很想釐清

(C) an expanding cloud of energized particles ejected from the Sun recently triggered a large storm in the magnetic field that surrounds Earth, brightening the Northern Lights and possibly knocking

(E) a large storm in the magnetic field surrounding Earth was recently triggered by an expanding cloud of energized particles, brightening the Northern Lights and it possibly knocked Logical predication; Rhetorical construction;

不曉得紅字的部份有沒有什麼優劣區分?
這邊的考法是否是關係代名詞子句限定，主動用that好過於Ving?

這題有不少其他考點，但是關於我問這個問題，希望有人可以幫忙解答。
謝謝~

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freethebmw 发表于 2015-6-21 20:29
这道题我们要从语义的角度去理解，第一句话讲了scientists who monitored its path，这里的its总要有个指代 ...

同意！               

chenlujing

freethebmw 发表于 2015-6-21 20:29
这道题我们要从语义的角度去理解，第一句话讲了scientists who monitored its path，这里的its总要有个指代 ...

同意！               

freethebmw

这道题我们要从语义的角度去理解，第一句话讲了scientists who monitored its path，这里的its总要有个指代吧，毫无疑问应该优先指代后面那句的主语，那么究竟是指代cloud呢还是storm呢？我们接着看。
这句话的意思大概就是这个什么什么什么的cloud最近激发了环绕地球磁场区的large storm，随后导致了brighten the northern lights and knock out a communications satellite。
好了，看到这里你大概能理解了scientist监测path不应该是storm的path而是cloud的path，因为这个storm是被recently trigger出来的，你怎么监测啊。
光这一点split不够，我们再分析分析，5个选项中其实只有C和E通过v-ing表达出了“cloud激发large storm”导致的结果，这个结果是什么什么。这个结果不是cloud单独导致的，也不是storm单独导致的，也是cloud作用于storm之后导致的，因此用现在分词表示伴随结果非常合适。
比较C和E呢，其实很明显E中brightening和it knocked不平行，当然前面也提到了，storm作为主句主语也是不合适的，所以C是最佳选项。