新G issue 51 求拍！！！！尽情地拍吧！！！

卡列洪

Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term ,realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition .

If young people have along-term ,realistic goals ,i think this group can at least achieve ameaningful life .However ,this can not deny the fact that, immediate fame andrecognition are also necessary for the growth of the young.

To begin with ,it is likely that the young, whogain a long-term ,realistic goal ,can have a better development in theircareers . A long-term ,realistic goal can provide the firm faith we need whenwe are in confrontation with the obstacle ,which seems rather tough for us toovercome. For the young who have just stepped in the society from colleges, nodoubt that they will face large amount of problems . A youngster who want to bea physical scientist would not give up when he have been failing to finishresearch for thousands of times . A young graduate who want to be a writerwon't stop writing even if his work is not popular. With the possession of arealistic and long-term goal ,we can better handle our career . Otherwise ,chance is that we will give up in the confrontation with the problems for thelack of determination.
In the second place , i believe that we should alsoseek immediate fame and recognition . The fame and recognition can undoubtedlygive the young the confidence we need . Much time is demanded in the process ofachieving a long-term goal. Anxiety would appear if the road is too long, andcan decline our power . Meantime ,this recognition can encourage us to workbetter ,and hence let us work more efficiently. For instance ,a highschoolstudent who want to be a student of MIT would take more pains to study if theprofessor form MIT give him the appreciation .
Long-term and realistic goal is needed , because itcan give us the firm determination .At the same time, we should not neglect thefunction of immediate fame and recognition ,which can keep the continuous power.In fact ,a long-term goal ,that is made up of lots of short-term goals ,may bethe best way for us young to fulfill our goals. With the encouragement whichcomes from short goals ,we would not be energy-lacked. At the same time ,withthe determination provided by the final goal, we can always be in the rightdirection without being confused.
To conclude ,the combination of the two mentionedabove is the best choice if we want to pursue a ambitious dream.

普渡哥

结尾太短了，最好简洁地概括一下全文才下一个结论。

很多老师只看开头结尾，你这样很吃亏。

竹林中人

For the young who have just stepped in the society from colleges, no doubt that they will face large amount of problems 。 no doubt是adv，不用后面接that。
你的内容有点单薄，虽然你说了两者都重要，但我觉得你还需要增加的是如何处理这两者的关系，因为经常这两者是矛盾的，我觉得你最好举个不好的例子，以说明没处理好这个矛盾的坏处。

卡列洪

嗯，确实，我没有把两者之间的联系建立起来。3Q!!!