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走过路过的同志们,深刻求批,谁能拯救我的作文啊!!!如此虐心为哪般

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发表于 2013-7-26 20:04:22 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
没错,你没看错,这就是一篇不适合存在这里的高中生水平的作文,当然,这里高中生水平是指本人从高中起就没有变过的写作能力,准确的说是从初中就没有变过。。。。。但是咱要考托啊,考托要写作文啊,一个作文写成这样的我怎么能上百啊,肿么办啊肿么办啊。。。拿什么拯救你啊我的作文。。。痛定思痛,我决定把脸皮买一送一赠送给托福写作了。。写的烂不是你的错。。不努力就是你的不对了。。。所以各位不小心看进来的亲。。拯救一下这个水深火热中的失足少年吧。。。她有一个梦。。。作文能写好。。。。在这先给各位好心人跪谢了~~~~~
言归正传。。下面是本次无下限历程chapter 1
题目   which of the following would you change to improve your health:1.the kind of food you eat 2.the amount of exercise 3.the amount of stress?
我都不好意思发了。。
As health problems has become a common scene in developed and even developing countries ,it's of great importance that more attention should be paid to our own health conditions .People have already aware of the emergency of keeping a health station for both body and mental .There are many methods of building a health life, some may choose to change from the food they take in .while others may change the amount of their exercise .in my opinion ,the crucial part concerning the health ,is to release our stress .
Living in an age changing minute by minute ,nobody can stay out of pressure. Competition from contemporary ,monitoring from superior ,unsatisfied of own state ,and ambitious for a promising future ,those factors combine as a huge mountain lying on our back ,which makes it almost impossible to breathe .Due to the stress arising from life ,exercise seems no longer necessary compared with the assignment on the hand .It's  a novelty news any more if we heard that people who are working at high press positions pass the world simply because irregular lifestyle and lacking conscious about their own sense.
What's worse, stress can not only lead to physical changes ,it also influent mental sound for human being .There's no denying that proper stress can inspire people for pursuing for better progress ,however ,when stress proceeds to be uncontrollable ,the negative affects it arises can destroy one person from heart and soul .One prevalent phenomenon is that increasing people choose eating as their way to release their pressure .Obviously ,the consequence of this kind of behavior leads to nothing ,but more pain .
In my opinion ,the most scientific and useful way to improve our health is by taking proper measure to release the stress regularly .With pressures  released ,we can find mental sound and focuses can be concentrated on the mission which is supposed to handle. There's no way to achieve a health state unless your heart is staying at a positive and optimistic station.
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沙发
发表于 2013-7-26 20:22:45 | 只看该作者
沙发。。。。。
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-26 20:27:40 | 只看该作者
bejamin1111 发表于 2013-7-26 20:22
沙发。。。。。

土豆~~~~~~
地板
发表于 2013-7-26 20:37:00 | 只看该作者
I don't know what to say, because Kingkang didn't show her photo~
——死灰
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-27 06:43:47 | 只看该作者
yinyulinzll 发表于 2013-7-26 20:37
I don't know what to say, because Kingkang didn't show her photo~
——死灰

cuipi have decided to depend on herself a little more ~so still no photo~
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发表于 2013-7-27 09:23:26 | 只看该作者
王小二要发奋 发表于 2013-7-27 06:43
cuipi have decided to depend on herself a little more ~so still no photo~

has~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-27 09:57:40 | 只看该作者
yinyulinzll 发表于 2013-7-27 09:23
has~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

............geiguile
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发表于 2013-7-27 10:08:34 | 只看该作者
People have already BEEN  aware of ... both body and mentality.....
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-7-27 12:40:24 | 只看该作者
strugglingboy 发表于 2013-7-27 10:08
People have already BEEN  aware of ... both body and mentality.....

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