[求助]拜托各位高手近来拍转。。

liyujie

29号就要考了。。因为生了一场病口语和写作都没有怎么准备。。就剩下这一个星期了。。。想要挽回一点点。。今天动笔写了第一篇作文。attend uni or college 的原因。。。。虽然已经是写烂了的话题，但是这个是自己写的。

请大家给些建议~~~~关于布局阿，长短句阿，表达阿什么的。。。

有什么拍什么。。在线等！

先谢过各位拉~~~~

还有个问题。段与段之间需要空一行么？我看og上的sample都没有空。。。迷茫中。。

Currently, more and more young people attend university or college. Different people have different reasons for attending university. But in my opinion, the most important factors are to prepare for career, to increase knowledge, and to get a new experience.

First of all, career preparation is a significant factor for those attend college. Because of the increasingly fierce competition in society, only those who have a good education and general knowledge can gain better work. Most big companies prefer to receive those well educated to work for their important project due to people who has a good education is more effective and skillful. So the career preparation is a influential factor for students to attend college or university.

Second, ‘knowledge is power.’ has been a common thought that encourages people to study more and get more from books to make him/herself more outstanding. It expands our eyesight by informing us with lots of new things what we cannot gain from our common life or experience.. For instance, a person who has a good grade in college may have more certain skill in one subject like science, agriculture and so on.

Last but not the least, people also want to get a new experience in college or university. Productive as the life in campus is, students will meet a lot of new friends who may be a excellent partner or a good helper in future. In addition, students have to learn to deal with the problems that they never met before and try to set up a well relationship with others.

Overall, people, who attend college or university, are preparing for their better futures.

phel

我在想一个问题，楼主这个文章够了300字么？？感觉字数少了些。还有那个模板气太重了呵呵～～