小女子再次请教OG12版，88题，未讨论过哟

88.  Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted in the stride-piano tradition of Willie (The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz tradition.

     (A)     Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted

     (B)     Thelonious Monk, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both

     (C)     Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk, who produced a body of work rooted

     (D)     Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted

     (E)     Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work rooted both

我不了解这里为什么不能用who 引导的从句来修饰主语Thelonious Monk，以及用同位语 the jazz pianist.....来修饰Thelonious Monk？

因为OG的解释里面说：The use of a relative clause (who was a jazz pianist…..) or an appositive (the jazz pianist…..) introduces unnecessary wordiness and grammatical complexity.

同位语的话 我觉得应该用a 不该用the

定语从句显然是啰嗦了

这题答案是什么？

我选了个B

两个都比正确答案啰嗦

不是不能用，是比答案相对要差

D.

B 总的Both用的多余了。

但解释中的B为什么不能用同位语也没有看懂。那位能解释一下？