prep08 sc222 真的糊涂了

891758149 · 发表于 2013-4-16 23:10:07

Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their death rates
from heart disease are far lower in France.

B.  people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the
C.  fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States's, their
D.  the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the
E.  the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the

B.  Correct
C.  Their指代People in France错误；
D.  the rate of fatty foods错，不是foods的rate，而应该是consuming foods的rate；consumed in France and  the United States错误，应该在the United States前加in，
E.  the rate of people错误，不是people的rate，应该是the rate of consumption；同时rate应改为rates，且
谓语动词改为复数，在the United States前加in

为什么c中their可以指代people in france 不是只能指代fatty foods 吗？

b 选项people in france and the us ，us 前不用加in
D,E 选项中rate 却要在 the us 前加in ？

thanks~~

rylstar01 · 发表于 2013-4-17 00:02:39

C,我也同意你的观点，their指代的是fatty foods；C错误在于，fatty foods are consumed...at a comparable rate to the United States's；States's的所有格有问题，而且fatty foods与United States's 对比，一个是食物对比，一个是国家的食物对比，不平等
D,E选项中 in 【France and the US】，句中整个结构的话，以D选项为例，the rate of fatty food consumed ...is about the same ；光使用In France and the US的话，无法表现出他们的对比；我觉得要是让他们对比，在这基础上，the rate of fatty food consumed in France and in US is the same...

说得词不达意了。回头想好更好的语言再来。

TINGYI-2014 · 发表于 2014-5-15 21:53:17

rylstar01 发表于 2013-4-17 00:02
C,我也同意你的观点，their指代的是fatty foods；C错误在于，fatty foods are consumed...at a comparable ...

同问，为什么b里面可以不用在us前面不用in呢？就因为它是正确答案就说这个对，那不是歧视嘛~~求解答~~

jzhuang08 · 发表于 2014-5-15 23:03:26

C 中的 their指代的是people 因为如果指代fatty food 逻辑不合理 fatty food death rate 也太那啥了 c 的错误在于united state`s，这个表达很困惑 united states 的什么？没有表达清楚

b 个人觉得是看成people in (France and United States) 。。这里的格式相比其它选项更清楚明白即可以省略 in

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