GWD23一道语法，很重要！求教

Spencer125 · 发表于 2013-6-15 21:04:39

When drafting theDeclaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women’s RightsConventions in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, wasa call for female enfranchisement.

A. When drafting the Declaration of Sentimentsthat was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Conventions in 1848,included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for femaleenfranchisement.

B. Includinga call for female enfranchisement, a draft of the Declaration of Sentiments wasadopted at the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Conventions in 1848 that ElizabethCady Stanton wrote.

C. Whenthe Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted atthe Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention in 1848, a call for female enfranchisementhad been included in it .

D. Acall for female enfranchisement, included in Elizabeth Cady Stanton’s draft ofthe Declaration of Sentiments in 1848, that was adopted by the Seneca FallsWomen’s Rights Convention.

E. WhenElizabeth Cady Stanton drafted the Declaration of Sentiments that was adoptedat the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention in 1848, she included in it acall for female enfranchisement.

答案是E。我有以下几个问题。
1. E中it不是犯了指代不清的错误吗？因为前面既有Declaration of Sentiments 又有Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention
2. E中后半句子的结构 she included in it a call for female enfranchisement.是什么东东。 she included in it，句子不是完了吗？为何后面又有a call for female enfranchisement. 做什么成分？？

Spencer125 · 发表于 2013-6-15 21:12:50

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abc791201064 · 发表于 2013-6-15 21:25:24

Spencer125 发表于 2013-6-15 21:12
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你好

我虽然复习很长时间了但是水品不行我是这么想的希望多多指点

1. 根据代词的原则当可能歧义的时候先指代主语然后是宾语介词结构里面的N一般不被当成先行词

2, 关于第二个问题我感觉是后置了比如 BRING A TO B 这个A如果很长就写成 BRING TO B A
不知道这么理解对不对请指点

Spencer125 · 发表于 2013-6-15 22:01:24

abc791201064 发表于 2013-6-15 21:25
你好

我虽然复习很长时间了但是水品不行我是这么想的希望多多指点

有人说，it只能修饰 the Declaration of Sentiments ，不修饰 the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention。他们的理由是the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convention是修饰the Declaration of Sentiments的。这一点，我不敢苟同！所以继续UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

对于第二个问题，有人说是倒装，对于这一点，我做保留，所以继续请求高人指点。

Spencer125 · 发表于 2013-6-15 22:02:27

有人能帮忙解答这一题的问题吗？？？？？？？？？？？？？？？？

abc791201064 · 发表于 2013-6-15 22:05:55

Spencer125 发表于 2013-6-15 22:01
有人说，it只能修饰 the Declaration of Sentiments ，不修饰 the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convent ...

不知道你说的倒桩是不是我这个理解第二个

第一个指代declar。。。

enkyklios · 发表于 2013-6-15 22:27:58

Spencer125 发表于 2013-6-15 22:01
有人说，it只能修饰 the Declaration of Sentiments ，不修饰 the Seneca Falls Women’s Rights Convent ...

spencer125 兄
小弟觉得对这个问题稍有心得想跟你分享，如果不对幸勿见笑；

关于1；

在所有格结构名词一般不作为指代对象。不能被主格或宾格代词指代。

http://forum.**.org/viewthread.php?action=printable&tid=236374

关于2；这是一个很常见的结构，一般语法上叫前置-- she included a call in it ，in it 被提前

但不管叫什么（语法术语不重要）楼上ABcabc791201064大哥说的思路是正确的

比如 BRING A TO B 这个A如果很长就写成 BRING TO B A

Spencer125 · 发表于 2013-6-15 22:28:00

abc791201064 发表于 2013-6-15 22:05
不知道你说的倒桩是不是我这个理解第二个

第一个指代declar。。。

感觉你的理解貌似好像不对吧

bejamin1111 · 发表于 2013-6-16 00:45:39

关于2我觉得楼上两位说的都没错。关于代词的指代问题，我觉得这里可以不难判断逻辑上是指代D，语法上是有可能指代到C，语法语法服务于逻辑，我觉得指代ok。而且代词指代我认为不会作为decisive splits，不必太纠结。从这个句子来看，其他选项的错误更明显。

Spencer125 · 发表于 2013-6-16 12:57:34

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