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发表于 2004-12-19 09:43:00 | 只看该作者

请大家拍砖!

Some people pay money for the things they want or need.  Other people trade products or goods for what they need.  Compare the advantages of these two ways of obtaining things.  Which way do you prefer?  Explain why.



When confronted with various choices, different people make their own decision. The analysis of these questions will improve the ability to make better judgment during the daily life. Some people prefer to trade products or goods for what they need. However, in my opinion, I would prefer to pay money for the things I want. In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence to support my viewpoint.



To begin with, buy something needed is more convenient than trading product for what people want. With the development of science and technology, our lives become easier. There are all kinds of department stores, chain stores and dolor stores which distribute throughout the whole city. When we want to buy food, we can go to various supermarkets; when we want to purchase clothes, countless department stores are available. Moreover, you can even buy the goods through internet without going out to search. However, if you want to trade products for what you want, you need to find if someone wants the product that you have. It takes time for you to look around and search. Therefore you cannot buy anything you like immediately, which will make you unhappy.



Next, judging the value of the good is easier when you buy something than you trade products. Because when you buy something, you can know the actual value of the goods through advertisements, newspaper and websites. You can compare the different price and get the good deal. Nevertheless, it is very hard to decide the value of the second-hand products when you want to trade products, thus it is hardly possible for you to get the good deal.



In addition, sometimes there are many things you cannot obtain by trading. For example, when you go to restaurant to have dinner, you need to pay the money directly; when you want to see the movie, you have to pay the ticket directly; when you want to go to school to have education, you have to pay the tuition directly.



Some people may disagree with me that in old time people always traded products to get what they wanted. However, in today’s highly developed society, paying money to get what we want is more practical. It will make us enjoy our lives better.



As discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that paying money for the things we need bring us lots of advantages, such as the convenience, high quality life and good deals. In fact, not only do I prefer to pay money to buy things, but also prefer to spend money as efficient as possible.

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2004-12-20 16:54:00 | 只看该作者


不好意思,实在是不知道题号,还请大家原谅!


难道就没有好心人帮我看看如何修改吗?真的不知道这样的作文能拿几分?

板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2004-12-21 05:18:00 | 只看该作者

不瞒您说,这是偶练习的第三篇作文,花了1个半小时.下个月初就要考了,到现在也没怎么练,个人觉得倒数第二段让步和结尾不好写,看了很多南瓜姐姐的作文,真是佩服的紧,请问有什么好建议?

地板
 楼主| 发表于 2004-12-21 14:21:00 | 只看该作者

嗯,我会努力的!还有一个问题想请教,作文评分主要看什么,结构,字数,还是内容比较重要呢?

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