【Assumption】People Have Pets VS People Have No Pets VS Healthy Life

麻倉枼 · 发表于 2013-1-18 11:52:14

又是一篇Argument了。。从列提纲到写作文，总花时间35min。。

请指教。。

1. 逻辑方面，
2. 语言方面，
3. structure方面，
4. 是否有回答了
Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptionsand what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

谢谢。。

普渡哥 · 发表于 2013-1-19 10:57:53

In conclusion, the author recommends people to reduce heart disease by having dogs is pretty preposterous when one first looks at it, and this memo contains lots of flaws so it does not support his recommendation.

这句前后应该是转折关系吧？

麻倉枼 · 发表于 2013-1-19 11:03:21

In conclusion, the author recommends people to reduce heart disease by having dogs is pretty preposterous when one first looks at it, and this memo contains lots of flaws so it does not support his recommendation.

这句前后应该是转折关系吧？

-- by 会员普渡哥 (2013/1/19 10:57:53)

怎样转折呢？

我上面的四个问题请问您的答复是？

[argument] 【Assumption】People Have Pets VS People Have No Pets VS Healthy Life

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